Some people think that schools should reward students who show the best academic results Flashcards
Some people think that schools should reward students who show the best academic results, while others believe that it is more important to reward students who show improvements. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Introduction:
- Giving encouragement for students has become a major..
+ Give awards to those who achieve the highest level of academic…. I believe this is not the most desirable solution, as will now be discussed.
Body:
- students with the best academic results should be rewarded.
+ Encourage students to study hard for the best grade > should be praised for their efforts.
+ Force other student to study harder to follow peers
+ make them feel jealous
-Reward those who endeavour to study and make great improvements.
+ Some students are smarter than other
+ normal students > incapable of competing with more intelligent students > feel reluctant to study
+ encourage normal student to study harder
+ as long as they try their best > archive what they deserve.
