Many people argue that in order to improve educational quality, high school students are encouraged to make comments or even criticism on their teachers.

Question 1

Many people argue that in order to improve educational quality, high school students are encouraged to make comments or even criticism on their teachers. Others think it will lead to loss of respect and discipline in the classroom. Discuss both views and give your own
opinion

Answer 1

Introduction:

• Effective way to improve educational quality in school
• encouraged to give their opinions about teachers >< give rise to lack of respect & discipline in the classroom.

Body:
- it is true that feedback from learners may contribute to an improvement in educational quality.
+Level of comprehension > relies on the content of the lesson & way teachers conduct it. Eg: teach too fast
+ it would be difficult to know whether the speed of the lesson is appropriate for the class > impact the quality

• Several drawbacks of allowing students to make comments and criticism on their teachers.
  + teachers can be vulnerable to the negative words of students
  + Their efforts in delivering the lesson deserve praise rather than criticism
  + Cause negative impact to their family
  + Kid might think they are bad teacher < less respect