Some people think that in order to prevent illness and disease, governments should make efforts in reducing environmental pollution and housing problems.

Question 1

Some people think that in order to prevent illness and disease, governments should make efforts in reducing environmental pollution and housing problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Answer 1

Introduction:

• The prevention of illness and disease is a challenging problem for any community.
• improving the environment and providing more housing for the public is effective >< better solution to the issues.

Body:
+ reducing pollution can hinder the spread of disease and illness
+ people’s health is broken < adverse effects of poor air quality > more vulnerable to viruses & HP
+ urban citizens suffer < lung & throat cancer < dangerous level of exhaust emissions from traffic
+ the provision of more accommodation for the public is also a highly effective measure to reduce health risks
+ Many people > homeless in society > poor access to medical services >riggers the rise of…>ig malaria

• There are more effective ways to prevent illness & …
  + Not all of diseases are caused by pollution < DNA
  + It is better to allocate money doing research to find treatment for these diseases.
  + educate people how to protect themselves from ….
  + kids > wash their hands before eating < gauze mask.