Many people are afraid to leave their homes because of the fear of crime. Some believe that more actions should be taken to prevent crime. Others feel that little can be done.

Question 1

Many people are afraid to leave their homes because of the fear of crime. Some believe that more actions should be taken to prevent crime. Others feel that little can be done. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Answer 1

Introduction:

• raising crime rate scares people into going outside ..
• While it is a common belief that reducing the crime rate > impossible mission >< I hold the view that.

Body:
- Reducing the crime rate is a difficult task because of..
+ poverty & unemployment > eliminate > crime disappear.
+ society > limited jobs > uneducated < difficult pursue career > becoming a thief > better way to survive.
+ busy parent < can’t take care of kids < criminal.

• Crime rate can be reduced by adopting a number of …
  + stricter sets of laws is a good way to prevent people from breaking the law.
  + eg: death sentence for murder in some countries < scare people into committing the crime
  +GOV encourage companies and ORGs to expand > create more job > reduce unemployment > people can effort their living < don have to become a thief & burglars.