Writting Flashcards
Boat Couple Lake Rubbish/refuse 时空间相结合
A wooden boat drifts smoothly in a lake .
A young couple sit on the boat.
They are eating snacks and casting the packaging into the lake.
The lake is filled with refuse.
整合：A wooden boat drifts smoothly in a lake;a young couple are sitting on it ,eating …and casting ….
A couple ,sitting on a boat which drifting smoothly in a lake, are eating snacks and casting packaging into the lake filled with refuse.
升级：不要从人下手，从湖下手：这有一片湖，湖上有一支船，船上有对小情侣，他们在吃着零食，扔着垃圾，湖里全是垃圾。
【 In a lake drifts a boat,on which sits on a young couple,eating snacks and casting packaging into the lake that is filled with refuse.】
👍[The picture is about ]a lake in which drifts a boat,on which sits on a young couple,eating snacks and casting packaging into the lake that is filled with refuse.
⚽️一个年轻人
写
贝克汉姆
脸上
另一个年轻人花300块去做一个「小贝头」
Hairstyle 发型
A young man has “BECKHAM”, a famous football player,painted on his left check.
Another young man spends 300 yuan to get a special haircut that makes his look like Beckham.
做一个造型have the hair styled.
👍we see two young 「devoted 」fans in the photos:
加上总结性的词语，会让考官耳目一新。
首段如何指出寓意 图画作文三大特征 1、普遍性 2、对立性 3、讽刺性
1、指出现象的句子结构 1⃣️很明显obviously，it isalmost certain that 2⃣️现如今/最近/过去十年以来等时间状语nowadays 3⃣️很多/一些an increasing number of 4⃣️人/粉丝/外国人westerners，foreigners 5⃣️尤其是/特别是especially，particularly 6⃣️变得/愈发/开始/已经start doing，begin to do 7⃣️倾向于/沉迷于/着迷于be addicted to doing,be obsessed with，be the keen lovers of 8⃣️做某事
比如：很明显，过去十年以来，很多西方人，特别是年轻人，开始着迷于中国传统文化。
Obviously, over the past decade, an increasing number of westerners,especially young westerners ,begin to be addicted to Chinese traditional culture.
中间段怎么写
避免：❌ 1⃣️堆砌句型 2⃣️内容空洞 3⃣️逻辑混乱 4⃣️没话找话，正话反说，反话正说… 🙆正确✅的操作： 1⃣️有比较清晰的结构：firstly，secondly…，因果，递进，对比🆚等等。 2⃣️有细节details，可能让考官产生共鸣。
加分点： 1⃣️用词精准 2⃣️表达不死板，尽量生动形象 3⃣️最重要的是逻辑结构，推理链条！！！！ 4⃣️篇幅的设计：有因果、例证、反证、比较、转折、上下义…
写挑战，不断挑战，可以用到的例子
1⃣️Tomas Edison 爱迪生，他成名很早early life，但他还在不断地设置新目标，去超越过去的自己。
On the one hand
On the other hand
指的是正反推理的方式
如何建立逻辑推理链条⛓️❓
句子与句子之间：就像一串葡萄🍇 1⃣️因果 2⃣️比较 3⃣️转折 4⃣️上下义（上抽象、下具体举例子） 🌟现象型【中间段在分析原因】 ⚠️建立因果链条（多因一果） ⚠️可以只建立一种链条，多种也可以。
Topic:为什么青少年会沉迷网游❓
观点
1⃣️从青少年本身，自控力不强，容易深陷其中
2⃣️从科技来说，发展越来越快，吸引力越来越大
3⃣️网友会让人有成就感、新鲜感[achieve a great a sense of satisfaction.]
提供细节支持观点。⚠️
3⃣️🌂
🍁First,they achieve a great a sense of satisfaction.
[做比较]While they may be bullied on campus or scolded for doing a bad job on homework by teachers, these growing juveniles can select their favorate ,strong game characters to slay enemies and destroy turrets in King’s Canyon.[王者峡谷]
🍁Second,online games ,mobile games in particular,offer them various fresh experiences [新鲜体验] they seldom get in the real world. You never have experiences like fighting a beast that breaks into your home,but it is amazing that you can slay a virtual monster many times using different characters,weapons and tactics.
开头写一个问句：why ……
回答：
Reasons for this abound,but two stands out.
为什么有那么多失信人员？「现象型」
钱💰👈🏻法律意识淡薄👈🏻监管不力👈🏻
👉🏻 I think the following reasons may account for this phenomenon.First, more and more people, especially young people [are blind by] 被遮蔽了双眼👀 craving for money. Always daydreaming of becoming rich overnight,they eventually end up [in cheaters.]
变成骗子🤦🏻♂️
👉🏻second,during the [close examination]仔细审查of cases about financial fraud,it is found that most of the criminals [have poor awareness of law,]法律意识淡薄thinking that they did not violated the law or that their [tricks won’t be penetrated.]戳穿诡计🌅
👉🏻 Finally ,the current supervision and penalty system should also [be to blame.] 也要担责For example,though tax fraud [abound ]大量存在in many institutes,the majority of these crimes cannot be detected,so the criminals cannot be charged.
言论型：好的开始等于成功了一半
（判断）
为什么【好的开始】就是成功了一半
重点分析好的开始，它的内涵。好的开始可能意味着你做了很多准备工作，比如刷别人的经验贴，去规避别人掉过的坑，从而能大大提高成功率。🦋
For the most part,a good start is half a success because it usually entails being well prepared for all the trials[考验] you can conceive of. 🍁And you may also rule out[排除]a couple of approaches that gives rise to failure so that the success rate is elevated from the very beginning.
🌰！
Here is a good example. I inquired about the test before setting out to prepare for it . Unlike my peers who build up vocabulary by rote[死记硬背], I spent one hour every day in the first month memorizing hundreds of common word roots,prefixes ,and suffixes—elements that make up words. So when my open my vocabulary book,I found it much more efficiently to memorize the words than before.
言论型：为人处事要谦虚（建议）
1⃣️写谦虚的好处
2⃣️骄傲的坏处
🍁It pays off[🈶️回报] to humble. If you tend to brag about yourself [吹嘘],your peers and friends may consider you to be arrogant and to show a sense of superiority. So they may decline to cooperate with or help you when in need,since people who are arrogant and superior are often rejected[不受待见] in our society.
🍁 On the contrary,if you are genuinely modest,you will earn much respect[赢得尊重]from people around you. They are willing to not only support for you career but to give you a hand when in trouble. Eventually,you are more likely to succeed and more important, befriend a great many peers.
上海迪士尼
禁带饮食事件
no outside food and beverage
In response to a lawsuit against its “no outside food and beverage” policy, Shanghai Disneyland said on Monday that the rule is “consistent with many other theme parks across China” and “guests are welcome to enjoy their own food and beverages outside the park”.
近日上海迪士尼乐园因”不得外带食品饮料”的规定被人告上法庭。12日，乐园回应称，该规定”与中国大部分主题乐园一致，欢迎游客在乐园外享用自带的食品及饮料”。
需将背包中携带的零食丢弃或吃掉(either throw away the snacks she had brought in her backpack or finish them)
投诉热线(complaint hotlines)
吃掉一部分零食并丢弃一部分(finish some snacks and discard the rest)
合法权益(legitimate interests)
确认禁止携带食品入园的格式条款无效(overturn the no-outside-food-and-drink policy)
赔偿原告损失(compensate her loss)
“服务合同纠纷(service contract dispute)”
法庭尚未判决(the verdict is pending)
对外带食品饮料没有限制(open to food and drinks from beyond its services)
酒精饮料(alcoholic beverage)
对亚洲国家采取”双重标准”(apply a “double standard” on Asian countries)
[相关词汇] 主题公园 theme park 门票 admission ticket 游乐园 amusement park 旋转木马 merry-go-round 过山车 roller coaster 摩天轮 ferris wheel
写尾段
总结➕建议➕畅想未来
[终点又有新的起点]To sum up, one’s view on his success determines his future. In my opinion,it is necessary to carry out a nation-wide campaign publishing people who have a burning desire for more and ever greater achievement when they are already well-known. So that people in the society will develop a forward looking attitude and make their life worth living and the world more beautiful as well.
评价现象
子女不养老
In my opinion,refusing to look after one’s own elderly parents not only tears apart family ties but also destroys social harmony.
So it is high time that people from all walks of life[各行各业]should combine to [improve the current situation.]. For example teachers should make children brought up to think that family members are more important than anything else. Bank should refuse to lend money to those showing no filial piety.[孝心]
评价
合作
It is precisely through teamwork that we achieve goals and realize dreams. I think school teachers should develop students ’team spirit and create for the latter opportunities for fulfilling tasks by cooperation.
展望Only in these ways can we build a more harmonious society.
