Afternoons Flashcards
introduction
- 1959
- collection called the Whitsun Weddings in 1964
- melancholic poem which focuses on the subject of marriage
- poem presents the banality of life for a group of young mothers, watching their children play in a park
- poem reflects on the transition from youth to maturity and Larkin depicts the women as caught in a tedious routine of domesticity and childcare, which has overtaken their former youth, beauty, passion and romanticism
structure
‘The leaves fall in ones and twos
From trees bordering
The new recreation ground’
- enjambment
- makes poem feel relentless
- just like the mundanity experienced by the people in the poem
form
- unrhymed free verse
- absence of a rhyme scheme - their joyless existence
- ‘Setting free their children.’
- structure
-end stopped lines
- sense of finality
- the mundanity of everyday life is inescapable
stanzas
- three stanzas of equal length - tripartite stanza structure reflects the ordered nature of women’s lives
- everything is the same
- normal, everyday life is boring and cycle cannot be broken
finish the quote: ‘young mothers..
..assemble’
finish the quote: ‘at…
…intervals’
‘young mothers assemble’
‘at intervals’
- military phrases
- highlights the regimented nature of the women’s lives
‘setting free…
…their children’
‘setting free their children’
- domestic life is like a cage
sibilance
- ‘swing’, ‘sandpit’ and ‘setting’ contrasts the children’s freedom with their parents, with the formality of husbands who ‘stand’ and are merely ‘skilled’
title - ‘afternoons’
- after noon, the peak of the day
- the ‘stage’ of a person’s life that could mirror
- “settling down stage”
- 30’s onwards
‘From trees bordering
The new recreation ground.’
- image of control
- trees have been planted around the park on purpose
- suburban life
- seems overcontrolling
‘an estateful…
…of washing’
‘an estateful of washing’
- image emphasises how never-ending domestic work is
- women are trapped by domesticity
‘lying near…
…the television’
‘lying near the television’
- image suggests that love has mellowed and has become taken for granted
‘summer…
…is fading’
‘summer is fading’
- metaphor
- prime part of life is over
‘unripe…
…acorns’
‘unripe acorns’
- image of youth
- emphasises that children aren’t ready yet to take over from their parents
‘their beauty…
…has thickened’
‘their beauty has thickened’
- criticises the women’s physical appearance as they have gotten older
- sexist
‘hollows’
- the afternoons are empty