5.8 Misplaced modifiers Flashcards
Misplaced modifiers
are phrases too far away from whatever they are supposed to modify. Be especially careful of adverbs and phrases referring to time.
The senate judiciary committee will confront the administration over the practice of targeted killings at a hearing on Tuesday. Whats the problem with this sentence
it sounds like the targeted killings happened at a hearing on Tuesday.
Dangler
a type of misplaced modifier. It dangles because it can’t hook on to anything in the sentence.
ex. Having finished dessert, the waitstaff cleared the plates away.
who finished the dessert? The diners who were not mentioned.
To spot and fix misplaced modifiers
carefully check the lead-ins and time phrases to make sure they’re next to whatever they’re modifying.