Lamia (1820) Flashcards
Last of the romances of 1820 to be written
- a medieval tale dealing with a hero of chivalry, of the kind common in the Romance languages: the Arthurian romances.
- the literary genre of romance.
- a work of fiction dealing with events remote from real life, especially one of a kind popular in the 16th and 17th centuries: Elizabethan pastoral romances.
-written after Keats worked on the first act of Otho the Great
meter and rhyme
triplets and alexandrines (drydenian heroic)
written in mostly couplets
What does the poem recount?
Hermes’s love for a nymph that appears perfect because it exists outside the vicissitudes of human desire.
Its account of an erotic enthrallment between Lamia and Lycius that turns into possessiveness and destruction.
Shows how love is flawed, gives an account of its frailties
” A long poem that arches from beginning to end with a central consciousness, a directly traceable story, a singular (not necessarily single) purpose, is truly more novel than poem. But it’s a novel that relies upon the devices and music of poetry as its motif.”
Part 1: Stanza 1
Breakdown
- The “ever-smitten Hermes,” bent warm on amorous theft, leaves his golden throne, escapes the sight of his great summoner, because somewhere there was a sacred nymph before whom all the Satyrs knelt, laid pearls. He was standing there, pensive and full of painful jealousies, when he heard a mournful voice, which asked when from this “wreathed tomb shall” it wake, when move in a sweet body fit for life.” The dove-footed Hermes glided among the taller grasses, brushed around in the full-flowering weed, and found a palpitating snake, “Bright, and cirque-couchant in a dusty brake.”
Anatomy of the long poem
Long poems are extreme.
Long poems grapple with narrative.
Long poems grapple with narrative but aren’t prose.
Long poems are confessional, because there is always a human being speaking and we bear witness to the dynamism of that human’s mind.
Part 1: Stanza 2
Breakdown
- She was in a “gordian shape of a dazzling hue, Vermilion-spotted, golden, green, and blue; striped like a zebra, freckled like a pard, eyed like a peacock, and all crimson barr’d; And full of silver moons, that she breathed, dissolv’d, or brighter shone;” her head was serpent, but ah, bitter sweet, she had a woman’s mouth, with all its pearls complete; triplets: “but for her eyes” what could they do but “weep, and weep” that they were born so fair like Properine for the Sicilian air…” Her throat was serpent but the words she spake came as through bubbling honey, for Love’s sake, and thus, Hermes creeped there on his pinions listening.
Long poems are all love poems.
“The kind of respect it means to linger, to spend time with someone, time on something. To stay,” writes McHugh in her short long poem, “Not a Prayer.”
Part I, Stanza 3
Breakdown
- She addresses him, and the address of the poem shifts. “I had a splendid dream of thee last night,” saw him sitting among the gods, “the only sad one,” and, “have you found your maid?” He responds: “anything for the beautiful serpent with melancholy eyes, telling me where my nymph is.” The snake says “Bright planet” and makes Hermes take an oath.” He does, light flies from his earnest words, and the snake says says: She is “Free as air, invisibly,” says, “she tastes unseen; unseen her nimble feet / leave traces in the grass and flowers sweet.” She “plucks the fruit unseen, she bathes unseen: and by my power is her beauty veil’d to keep it unassail’d by the glances of unlovely eyes” – and so, as a result, “I took compassion on her, bade her to steep her hair in weïrd syrops that would keep her lovelieness invisible yet free to wander as she loves in liberty” (Fancy’s casket is still unlock’d to choose, with the world of love at her feet, apparently”). The snake says that Hermes can behold her if he makes another oath to grant her “boon,” or wish–in a triplet in the narrative voice.
Long poems create intimacy
Marriage or a long-term relationship isn’t a long one-night stand in which one person never goes home. A long poem isn’t just a short poem that the poet forgot to end. Both require and inspire a different mindset, a different pacing, a different way of being, a different kind and level of intimacy with another person and with the self. When reading a good short or mid-length poem, I feel a shock of recognition – like catching a stranger’s eye on the subway – but this fleeting, intense connection underscores the separation between the poem and me, the otherness of the poet and his world from me and mine. Because of the breaks and points of entry, and simply because of how long I “exist” with and within the poem, I am committed to and invested in a long poem in a way that I can never be with a short poem.
Part I, Stanza 4
Breakdown
The serpent says that she “was a woman, let me have once more / A woman’s shape, and charming as before,” that she loves a youth of Corinth, that “give me a woman’s form, and place me where he is” (she was probably a cursed fairy); “Stoop” she tells him so that she can “breath upon his brow / and thou shalt see thy sweet nymph even now.” Triplet: “The god on half-shut feathers serene, / She breathed upon his eyes and swift was seen / Of both the guarded nymph near-smiling on the green.” Then, repetition: “It was no DREAM, or say a DREAM it was, / REAL are the DREAMS of Gods, and smoothly pass / Their pleasures in a long immortal dream.” He experiences a “warm, flush’d moment, hovering,” dashed and enamored. Hermes puts a languid arm over the serpent. Then, at last, he turned to the nymph, his eyes bent upon her and full of adoring tears and step’t towards her. And “she, like a moon in wane, faded before him.” She cower’d, could not restrain her fearful sobs, was “self-folding like a flower.” Hermes took her chilled hand, she felt his warmth. Her eyelids open’d bland, and bloomed, like new flowers at the morning song of bees. THEN: Into the green recessed woods they flew; Nor grew they pale, as mortal lovers do.
Long poems discover themselves
David Trinidad, who writes long and short poems: “I also remember thinking, in the middle of ‘A Poem Under the Influence,’ that it was like a mural (versus a shorter poem, which is more like a single canvas), so long and wide I couldn’t see what was around the corner, or where it would end.” Just as the essay is a form in which a writer discovers what she believes, the long poem is a form in which the poet discovers herself and the shape of the poem in the writing.
Part I, Stanza 5
Breakdown
Hermes and the nymph leave the serpent alone, who begins to change. Her “elfin blood in madness ran,” her mouth “foam’d…” Triplet: “Her eyes in torture fix’d, and anguish drear, / Hot, glaz’d, and wide, with lashes all sear, / Flash’d phosphor and sharp sparks, without one cooling tear.” In her train, the colors inflam’d, “she writh’d about in scarlett pain.” Her milder-mooned body’s grace turned yellow, and spoilt her silver-gold scales, made her frecklings, streaks and bars gloomy, “eclips’d her crescents, lick’d up her stars.” “Nothing but pain and ugliness were left.” She literally disappeared. “And in the air, her new voice luting soft, / Cried Lycuis!” And then these words dissolved.
Long poems allow the poet to change her mind.
This is part of the delight of the long poem. “Do I contradict myself? / Very well then I contradict myself, / (I am large, I contain multitudes.)” writes Whitman.
Part I, Stanza 6
Breakdown
Whither fled Lamia, now a lady bright? Asks the narrative voice. To Corinth for Lycius. There she sat, “finally “passioned, / To see herself escap’d from so sore ills, / While her robes flaunted with the daffodils.”
Long poems change the mind.
In an interview with Jennifer Dick (on Doublechange), Notley said, “What I’m doing is creating – trying to create – a different consciousness … And I think this happens for some other people. It actually makes your head different.”
Part I, Stanza 7
Breakdown
Happy Lycius, for she was now a maid
“Yet of sciential brain / To unperplex bliss from its neighbor pain ; / Define their pettish limits and estrange / Their points of contact, and swift counterchange. This is “Intrigue with the specious chaos” to “dispart / its most ambiguous atoms in with sure art.” Basically, forcing univocity on things that are inextricably entangled to the point of ambiguity. Another triplet at the end, in cupids college she had spent / sweet days as a lovely graduate still unshent / and kept his rosy terms in idle languishment.”