Circumcision Flashcards
Having hauled down my pyjamas
- authentic experience
They dragged me, all legs and teeth,
- atmosphere of violence
- resistance
That fateful afternoon, to a stool
- never be the same
Before which the barber hunkered
- doctor who carries out circumcision
- haunched
With an open cut-throat. He stropped it
- sharpening the knife
On his palm with obvious relish.
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I did not like his mustachios, nor
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Hid conciliatory smile. Somehow
- reassure the speaker
They made me sit, and two cousins
- force
Help a leg apiece. The barber
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Looked at me; I stared right back,
- bravado
Defying him to start something.
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He just turned aside to whisper
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To my cousin who suddenly cried
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‘Oh look at that golden bird,’
- distraction
And being only six I looked up;
- naive and young
Which was all the time he needed
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To separate me from my prepuce.
- foreskin
‘Bastard, sonofapig,’ I roared,
- outraged and angered
‘Sister-ravisher, you pimp
- worst words he knows
and catamite,’ While he applied
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Salve and bandaged the organ.
- pain
Beside myself and indignation
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and pain, I forgot the presence
- pain made him forget who were around him
Of elders, and cursed and cursed
- he learnt the crass from children’s games
In the graphic vocabulary
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Of the lanes, acquired at leap-frog,
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Marbles, and blindman’s bluff.
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Still frothing at the mouth they fetched
- still angry when he was taken home
Me to bed, where an anxious mother
- relates to his age
Kissed and consoled me. It was not
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Till I was alone that I dared
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To look down at my naked middle.
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When I saw it so foreshortened,
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Raw, and swathed in lint, I burst
- Shocked and horrified
Into fresh tears. Dismally
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I wondered if I would ever
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Be able to pee again.
- despair
This
- reflective tone
Was many many years ago.
- significant memory even though it was so long ago
I have since learnt that it was more
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Than a ritual, for by the act
- it means more, he understands that
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Of a pull and downward slash,
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They prepare us for disappointments
- realisation that it made him understand the absence of hope
At the absence of golden birds
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Life will ask us to look at
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Between our circumcision and death.
- Loss of innocence
- many events alike to this
Overview
- Speaker’s experience vs. speakers realisation
- narrative style
- enjambment (a sense of prolongment)
- metaphors about life