poetry of the decade - not examined yet Flashcards
on her blindness = intertextuality
to john milton’s ‘on his blindness’ reflects a mocking of his stance on stoicism in the face of debilitating illness
could not bear being blind = plosive alliteration
helps build the blunt, brutal reality of her suffering
to be honest = colloquial
empty phrases emphasise lack of genuine truth
one shouldn’t say it. = end-stop, and overly formal language
clipped sentence emphasises expectations of society, that the speaker facetiously mocks language used by stoic people
one should…
reflects the outdated, stiff, upper lip of Britain
handicaps are hell = alliteration
her blindness leads to a life of repetitive suffering
like a roman = simile
heroism, being stoic in the face adversary is what is expected
paris restaurant = setting
flashy, sophisticated setting juxtaposes the mother’s behaviour that is arguably undignifying and clumsy as a result of her blindness
still not finding//the food on the plate with her fork,//or not so that it stayed on
lack of figurative language is the speaker’s way of being direct and realistic
(try it//in a pitch-black room) = enjambement
stream of consciousness, anecdotal
whispered,//’it’s living hell’
still the sense of not fully confronting the truth
i’d bump//myself off = euphamistic and colloquial
contrasts the overly formal language, and depicts the reality of the illness, makes the confession seem more honest, conveying their trust
inadequate: the locked-in son. = metaphor emphasised by the punctuation
clipped language reflects his feelings of being insufficient at communicating
bumping into walls like a dodgem = simile
creates comical image, using humour to cover up reality, perhaps denial
pretended to ignore//the void
sense of complete absence
long//slow slide = assonance
makes it sound really drawn out like the slow demise to death
black as death. = simile and caesura
shows degeneration of her eyesight and the permanent, brutal reality
she’d visit exhibitions//admire films, sink into television = asyndetic list
lack of conjunctions reflect her futile attempt to do an endless amount of things to compensate
while looking the wrong way = bathos
anti climactic humour that immediately contrasts the mother’s endeavours
golden weather /// ground royal
connotations of wealth, richness, texture are intensely visual and add to the poignancy that the mother cannot see
i told her this, forgetting
almost like their natural default after pretending for so long
‘it’s lovely out there’ = return to dialogue
significant as the poem is about what we say/ don’t say
no more sightless, but now she can’t//pretend. her eyelids were closed = unrhyming couplet
suggests rapid progression of one idea to another, alongside lack of contemplation
she was watching, somewhere, in the end. = separate final line
possible suggestion of isolation in death, as the fiction and pretending continues, even after she dies; the indefinite pronoun adds to the fragility of their illusion
repeated use of enjambement in On Her Blindness (breaking of units of sense across white space between stanzas)
disorientating effect, making it harder for the reader to negotiate the poem’s meaning
what does the narrator of On Her Blindness acknowledge?
the lies we tell ourselves in the face of frailty and ageing, and his regret at ‘looking the wrong way’
please hold = title
significant as it is said by the robot, already establishing a sense of the speaker being controlled
this is the future = opening clause
awkward and disorientating so we can relate to the speaker
my wife says. = end-stop
emphasises her acceptance of this way of life, and separates her from the speaker
your future, here, she says = clipped language
makes the wife seem robotic
the robot is giving me countless options, = end-stop
ironic hyperbole is emphasised as his options are limited and ineffectual
when i give him x 2 = syntactic parallelism / repetition
conveys the way humans are becoming robotic as well, the more they conform. speaker is monotonous, reflective of automated, futuristic lifestyle that is interminable
answer to my needs… meet my needs = repeated phrase
emphasises the pointlessness, cynical nature of the interation
(which is really the robot’s account) = parenthesis
indicative of self-awareness and individuality of the speaker
wonderful account… great telephone bill = cynical tone
facetiousness and facade that masks sinister aspect of technology
wonderful telephone number… great account = hyperbolic language
saturation of hyperbolic language that lacks any substance
and my wife says, This is the future = capitalisation
reflecting wider society, alongside the refrain (repeated phrase)
please say yes or no// or you can say repeat or menu
the only options being significantly shorter / monosyllabic reflects restriction
i scream agent! = shift in speaker
progression of heightened emotions
and am cut off
emotions are minimised as despite his aggression, he is still powerless as technology restricts his individuality
and he is giving me no options//in the guise of countless alternatives = juxtaposition
shift in structure that emphasises the facade created by the false freedom offered by technology
eine kleine nachtmusik. please hold.//eine kleine nachtmusik, please hold// = epistrophe
endless cycle and lack of progression
eine fucking kleine nachtmusik = diacope
emphasies frustration and his individuality, the vulgar language contrasts the attempts to pacify him
and my translator says, Please hold//means that, for all your accomplishments,//the only way you can now meet your needs//is by looting.
sentence going over several lines shows individuality of the voice that cannot be replicated by technology
only way you can now meet your needs//is by looting
access to money and power is tightly controlled at a societal level, so you have to transgress in order to get anywhere
please hold. please grow old. please grow cold. = internal rhyme
connotations of death move poem from satire to a more sinister conclusion
what is the warning at the end of Please Hold?
a whole life might pass by while you wait for the answer you need
this is the future. please hold. = heteroglossia
amalgamation of speakers that present an ambiguity of who is speaking to emphasise conformity
please hold = final line
emphasises compliant and passivity, dystopian
what form of a poem is the Lamnas Hireling?
dramatic monologue that captures the ambiguity and mystery of folklore