Module B: 'The Redfern Speech' 1992 Flashcards
“We brought the diseases… We committed the murders… We failed to see that what we were doing degraded all of us”.
anaphoric references to the past, Keating uses active emotive language to list the wrongdoings committed by colonial Australia
“We brought the diseases… We committed the murders… We failed to see that what we were doing degraded all of us”.
This strong appeal to Pathos through parallelism and the use of the first person attempts to persuade a broader, largely ignorant Australian society to acknowledge the plight of ATSI peoples.
Importantly, K provides insight into the shared emotional impact that failing to
act on injustice can have on entire populations
We come to appreciate the importance of speeches
that attempt to address injustice and why they resonate so deeply within a society afflicted by this wrongdoing.
Audience’s response of emotive cheering indicates
Indicates Keating succeeded in observing decorum despite the unpleasant, sensitive message.
“Guilt is not a very constructive emotion. I think what we need to do is open our hearts a bit. All of us.”
Inclusive language- link to Lessing.
Deliberative rhetoric
effect “Guilt is not a very constructive emotion. I think what we need to do is open our hearts a bit. All of us.”
Conveys his purposes and that to achieve justice, injustices must first be recognised, (theme of humanity)
‘many of our own most deeply held values, much of our own identity- and our own humanity.’
Inlucisve language and emotive language
Effect :‘many of our own most deeply held values, much of our own identity- and our own humanity.’
Establishes his credibility and ethos attempting to persuade his audience to unite. (Link to Sadat-humanity & unity)
“…if we can build a … harmonious multicultural society… we can find just solutions to the problems which beset the first Australians.”
Inclusive language, repeated ‘we can’ and kinaesthetic imagery
Effect: “…if we can build a … harmonious multicultural society… we can find just solutions to the problems which beset the first Australians.”
Appeals to logos, further stressing notion of recognition
“Redfern is a good place to contemplate these things”.
recognition of Kairos, enhancing the resonance of his message.
We realise that to respond to perceived injustices, the speechwriter themselves must be
passionate for the issue they address, as recognised by Keating. in his speech he powerfully demonstrates the passion and attitude necessary to surpass immense disconnect and inequality between ATSI and non-ATSI peoples.
Keating depicts notion that positive attitude and action is required to address the wrongdoings committed by colonial Australia to the ATSI community
explicating the benefit it would have on the whole of Australia. (through dehortatio.)
. “imagine the Aboriginal view”
dehortatio