From The Explorer's Daughter Flashcards
“Plumes of spray” “glittering kingdom” “butter-gold”
These descriptions make the place seem magical and unreal which contrast with the act of hunting and killing animals.
“Distances are always deceptive in the Arctic”
In the real world distances are concrete measurements but this is different in the Arctic. This uncertainty may reflect the later moral dilema
“Two hours after” “Within an hour”
Waiting indicates that the event is very significant (foregrounding) also puts readers straight into the action.
“As if they were going to merge, but always slowly, methodically passing each other by”
Peaceful and intelligent description of the narwhal with the adverbs creating soft sounds. This creates sympathy for the narwhals.
“The hunters were dotted all around the fjord”
Men appear small and insignificant which makes them appear brace in a heroic struggle against the narwhal and environment.
“…returned and eaten, narwhal were spotted again, this time very close.”
Commas break up the first sentence into short phrases which creates apprehension and suspense.
“Scrambling”
Continuous present tense shows the excitement of the inhuit people
“The narwhal rarely stay from the high Arctic waters …”
Change in focus in r second paragraph reflects the two purposes of the text which are to be informative and to explain her feelings
Lots of semantic field vocabulary
“Binoculars pointing in every direction”
Hyperbole shows the excitement of the people
“Small ancient dwellings”
Almost poetic description contests with the technical language in that paragraph and provides cohesion with paragraph 1
“It was part of their staple diet”
Shows how crucial the narwhal is to the people
Describes the hunt as a “game”
Shows anticipation, creates suspense, creates sympathy for narwhal
“My heart kept for both hunter and narwhal”
Shows her inner conflict with her western views and how she knows that this is needed for the people
“To dive, to leave, to survive”
Rule of three builds tension but they are also infinitive verbs for emphasis and they summarise the writer’s strong feelings of sympathy.
“Spectral plays of colours” “plumes of spray”
Initial concerntration on visuals and imagery draws the reader into the story but ends with a consideration into the ethical issues of hunting