Chapter 5 Flashcards
Audience sensitivity
- adopt a “you” attitude
- demonstrate business etiquette
- emphasize the positive
- use bias-free language
The “you” attitude
Speaking and writing in terms of the audiences interests, hopes, and preferences
Genuine empathy
Bias free language
Age
Gender
Disability
Race or ethnicity
Controlling style and tone
Conversational tone
Plain English
Active and passive voice
Active voice
Subject + verb + object
Direct, concise, vigorous
Passive voice
Object + verb + subject
Indirect, tactful, reserved
Composing the message
Word choice
Sentences
Paragraphs
Word choice
Strong words vs abstract words
Sentences
Sentences should be no more than 30 words long because of coherence
Paragraphs
Paragraphs should be no more than 8 lines long. Avoid one-sentence paragraphs. Typically, a letter has 3 paragraphs
Finding words that communicate well
Use strong verbs
Use familiar words
Avoid cliches & buzzwords
Minimize jargon
Use strong words
Choose words that express your thoughts clearly, specifically, & dynamically.
Use nouns and verbs as much as you can
Adjectives and adverbs often evoke subjective judgements
Verbs
Tell what is happening in the sentence
Choose familiar words
Communicate best with words familiar to your readers
Words familiar to one reader might be unfamiliar to another
Avoid cliches and buzzwords
Beware of terms and phrases so common that they have become virtually meaningless
Use jargon carefully
When deciding whether to use technical jargon, let your audiences knowledge guide you.
Effective sentences
Simple
Compound
Complex
Compound-complex
Simple sentence
Has one main clause (a single subject and a single predicate)
Compound sentence
Has two main clauses that express two or more independent but related thoughts of equal importance (usually joined by and, but, or)
Merger of two or more simple sentences
Complex sentence
Expresses one main thought (independent clause) and one or more subordinate thoughts (dependent clause ) related to it, often separated by a comma.
Compound-complex sentence
Two main clauses, at least one of which containing a subordinate clause.
Coordinate conjunctions -compound
And , but, so
Require only a comma to link to independent clauses
Adverbial conjunctions -compound
Therefore, however, nevertheless
Requires a semicolon to link to independent clauses
Omitting conjunctions -compound
Requires only a semicolon to link independent clauses
Subordinate conjunctions-complex
Because, if, when, since, although, while
If the dependent clause begins the sentence, a comma is required
Coherent paragraphs
Topic sentences
Support sentences
Transitions
Paragraph
Cluster of sentences all related to the same general topic
Topic sentence
Sentence that introduces the single topic of the paragraph