Chapter 11: Writing Negative Messages Flashcards
What are the five goals of Negative Communication?
- Convey the bad News
- Gain Acceptance of the bad news
- Maintain Audience Goodwill
- Maintain Good Image for Organization
- Reduce the Need for Future Correspondence on the matter
What should you do in the planning stage of Negative communication?
- Analyse the situation- consider the audience, context
- Ensure the purpose is specific, necessary, and appropriate for the medium you’ve chosen.
- Define Main Idea
- Choose Approach-
- Direct: Open with bad news, present reasons, end on a positive note
- Indirect: Open with Buffer, Gives reasons, then bad news
Hoe do you know when to use direct or indirect approach?
Generally- Indirect is used, but:
Want to Get attention- Direct
News Not Shocking- Direct
News is Shocking- Indirect
But use to audience’s preference (which you would get in planning step)
What do you do in the writing step of negative communication?
- Establish credibility (clarify qualifications) so reader doesn’t question your authority/ability.
- Use language that shows respect and avoids accusing tone
- Integrate positive words to ease the disappointment
What do you do in the completing step of negative communication?
- Revise for clarity, completeness and conciseness
- Make docs clean and professional, proofread for any mistakes
- Deliver messages promptly; withholding bad news is unethical and even illegal
What are the 3 steps for using the direct approach effectively to communicate negative information?
- Opening With a Clear Statement of the Bad News
- Providing Reasons and Additional Information
- Close on a respectful note
What are the 4 steps to opening with a clear statement of the bad news?
- State bad news at the beginning
- Maintain calm, professional tone
- Focues on the News Not on Individuals
- Explain or remind the reader why you are writing If necessary
What are the 2 steps in providing reasons and additional information for Direct approach?
- Explain why the News is negative
2. Determine whether/not to apologize
What are the 4 steps of Closing on a respectful note?
- Sympathize, show them you understand the impact of the negative message
- Consider offering realistic alternatives if appropriate
- Include positive statements (don’t give false hope tho), but don’t use them to minimize/ eliminate the fact that something bad happened- look to balance as best as possible
- Communicate How future mistakes will be avoided- shows sincerity in the apology, shows commitment to improve
What are the 4 steps to effectively use the indirect approach when conveying negative info?
- Opening With a buffer
- Providing reasons and Additional Info
- Continuing With Clear statement of Bad News
- Close on a Respectful Note
How do you open with a buffer?
- Can express appreciation for being considered, assure readers you’ve given attention to their request, or that you understand their needs.
- Be relevant (info should be connected to the news without giving away too much), and sincere
- Do not trivialize the reader’s concern, divert attention from the issue with insincere flattery/ irrelevant material
- Do not mislead them to think the message contains good news.
What two things must you do in providing reasons and additional information in the Indirect Approach?
- State reasons effectively so to lead readers to a conclusion before you even say it.
- Avoid hiding behind company policy to cushion bad news. Share reasons behind company policy to give a more satisfying answer.
What are the 3 ways in which we can continue with a clear statement of the bad news?
- Handle Bad News Carefully
-Minimize space or time used for bad news
-Subordinate bad news in compound or complex sentence
-Place bad news in the middle or use parenthetical expressions
Eg. (Our Profits are down, which are only part of the picture) - Use a Conditional Statement (If Appropriate)
- Emphasize what You Did, Not What you Cannot Do
What are the 5 ways in which we can close on a respectful note?
- Find Positive Angle
- Avoid an Uncertain conclusion- if the deal is closed, that’s it
- Manage Future Correspondence- Encourage additional communication only if you’re willing to discuss the situation further.
- Express Optimism (If there’s a chance of improvement in the future)
- Be sincere- Be honest in stating your intentions
What are 3 important reasons for maintaining high standards of ethics and etiquette when delivering negative news?
- It may be legally required to do so
- Message may negatively impact the reader, so ethics (which implements care and sensitivity in dealing with these things) are needed
- Following ethics and etiquette can help writers control emotions, and produce a message that considers the audience’s feelings. The audience will in turn have their emotions under control and produce a better reaction.