127 Hours: Between a Rock and a Hard Place Flashcards
‘refrigerator chockstone’
metaphor - helps communicate size/weight of the rock
‘claustrophobic’, ‘the slot narrows to a consistent three feet across’
references to confined spaces emphasise the small size of them and hints for the first time at a fear of being trapped
‘sometimes in narrow passages like this one’
technical expertise - moves away from subject to explain to reader
‘you can imagine using it to clump up the inside of a chimney’
direct address (2nd person) - involves reader and makes a clearer image
‘chockstone the size of a large bus tire’
metaphor - helps reader to visualise, as well as emphasise the sheer size of the rock
‘if i can step onto it, then i’ll have a nine-foot height to descend’
future - draws reader into decision making process, as well as foreshadowing that perhaps that doesn’t happen
‘dangle’
give impression of precarious position; creates feeling of danger
‘instantly, i know this is trouble, and instinctively’
alliteration draws attention to writer’s reaction; adverbs show speed of reaction and creates a tense atmosphere
‘consumes the sky’
personification - image is aggressive/frightening, as if the stone is attacking him
‘time dilates, as if i’m dreaming, and my reaction decelerate’
clauses get sequentially longer - mirrors the way time feels to writer, as well as mimicking his reaction time slowing down
‘collision’, ‘yank’, ‘ricochets’,’crushes’
words with violent connotations to emphasise how aggressive accident is.
‘ensnares my right arm’
personification/metaphor - compares to an animal caught in a trap, which makes rock seem like it is actually active
‘flaring agony’
metaphor - compares to something explosive; violent image
‘i grimace and growl’
alliteration creates the sound of the growl in reader’s head
‘anxiety has my brain tweaking’
metaphor - comparing to a drug addict who is desperate for next fix; pain is all he can focus on/pain is disorienting