Valentine Flashcards
Not a red rose or a satin heart
‘Not’ contrasts title, rejects tradition
Alliteration creates a nice sound
Sets tone
Introduces them of non traditional love
I give you an onion
Short sentence, contrasts , humorous
Subverts tradition images of love
It is a moon wrapped in brown paper
Lunar cycles alluded to
“Brown paper” simple, unpretentious wrapping with no intention of deceit
It promises light
Optimism, hopefulness, expectation
Like the careful undressing of love
Simile
Suggestion of affection
Tenderness and unwrapping
The physical act of love , just as the flesh of the onion is peeled
Here….
Take it
Brevity and isolation of the phrases
Highlights the lack of sentimentality in narrators tone
Practical and forceful
Unromantic
It will blind you with tears
Metaphor
Tears provoked by cutting onions
Symbolic of tears caused by pain / hurt of failed romance
It will make your reflection/
A wobbling photo of grief
Transferred epithet
Transference of the emotion to the reflection
Suggestive of a love wrought, devastated individual gazing at her tear stained reflection somewhat self indulgently perhaps
I am trying to be truthful
Centre of poem
Isolated in a single verse/ line
Creates a sense of narrator imploring her lover to have faith in her
Sees herself as more genuine than the fake lovers of the red rose
Not a cute card or a kissogram
Paralitical (repeated) structure (not a red rose or a satin heart)
Emphasis on the negative reputation of ‘Not’
Highlights narrators disapproval of traditional gifts
I give you an onion (2)
Repetition
Emphasises on sinple nature of the gift, the genuine sentiment of the narrator
It’s fierce kiss
Stinging effect of onion on lips
Reflects a kiss which might be destructive, hurtful, physically painful
Stay on your lips
Indicates lasting impact of a lovers kiss
Permanence of the emotional effect
Possessive and faithful
Juxtaposition
Creates an apparent contrast but experience teaches us the two are not mutually exclusive
In a romantic relationship the lines are blurred
Fidelity and its demands can lead to a desire to own a lover
Its platinum loops shrink to a wedding ring
Metaphor
Connotation of constriction, effect over time of a suffocating marriage, the ring tightens