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Question 1

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Answer 1

A significant shift comes when the writer moves on to focus on…and tells the reader that… and…. . Introducing this information at this point enables the reader to… It creates the impression that Charlie is…and therefore the reader feels… It might also suggest that Charlie is which may lead us to wonder… Also within this paragraph, there are references to… and… . This focus tells us that Charlie is… and makes the reader think/feel… Therefore they will be encouraged to read on because…

Question 2

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Answer 2

Finally, the writer ends by shifting to focus on… and… . This immediately has an effect because it makes the reader … It changes the overall feel of the extract by… The very final moments in the extract shift to show the reader…with references to… This is an effective ending because it leaves us with the impression that… It may make the reader think/wonder/question feel… They will be intrigued to read on to…