Mrs Midas Flashcards
It was late September.
september connotes autumnal colours like golden leaves and trees.
I’d just poured a glass of wine, begun to unwind 5
-rhyme emphasises the idea of casual feelings and relaxation.
-There are no worries.
-Unwind suggests stereotypical role of a housewife and she is enjoying that.
-Unwind connotes her being relaxed, calm and happy.
-Enjoying ordinary house work.
The kitchen
filled with the smell of itself, relaxed, 1
parenthesis emphasises the sense of calmness and tranquillity.
its steamy breath gently blanching the windows. 4
-imagery used to personify the steam.
-Suggests that a normal activity such as cooking is very positive.
-The windows are part of the atmosphere and the whole of the kitchen is part of the calm atmosphere.
-Steamy breath has sexual connotations which emphasises the idea of their passionate relationship.
then with my fingers wiped the other’s glass like a brow. 3
-reminds us of a lover’s action of wiping their partner’s forehead.
-Holds sexual undertones and connotes domestic bliss and a positive relationship.
-It is a comforting and romantic gesture also suggesting the relationship is good.
Now the garden was long and the visibility poor 2
No vision suggests it is hard to see and it is getting dark.
This creates a sinister atmosphere
the way the dark of the ground seems to drink the light of the sky
-Negative image reminding us of a vampire.
-The light that represents the good in the world is taken away from the darkness which is evil.
-This suggests his new power is really negative and bad.
– we grew Fondante d’Automne – 2
–Parentheses emphasising the luxury brand.
-This suggests she is showing off her fruits giving us a boastful personality.
On. I thought to myself, Is he putting fairy lights in the tree? 4
-The question emphasises her puzzlement and confusion.
-She doesn’t understand why the tree is lighting up.
-The minor sentence emphasises the idea that the colour is so golden that it is like a light.
-It seems like it couldn’t be anything else.
What in the name of God is going on? 4
-The question emphasises her confusion of the situation.
-God suggests she is struggling not to swear here yet she is so shocked.
-It feels supernatural.
-Suggests she feels panicked.
I thought of the Field of the Cloth of Gold and of Miss Macready.
-she can only remember her history lesson where wealth was shown.
-Nothing else compares to this idea as it is so bizarre and confusing.
He sat in that chair like a king on a burnished throne. 2
-image. Just as a king is in control, so too does Mr Midas feel he has dominance and is full of command.
-It emphasises that he feels full of power.
The look on his face was strange, wild, vain. 5
-list emphasises the negative qualities and how he is scaring her.
-Wild has connotations of being like an animal and out of control.
-Vain connotes him thinking he is amazing and thinks a lot of himself.
-Strange has connotations of it being weird and he is acting unusual.
-Suggests she feels fearful and scared of him
He started to laugh. 4
-short sentence emphasises how cruel he is.
-She is confused and he is not affected.
-He is hysterical and nasty.
-We see the relationship deteriorating as he is finding her pain and confusion funny.
I served up the meal. For starters, corn on the cob. 2
-unusual thing to eat for starters.
Corn on the cob is typically golden and suggests the natural order of things are perverted and no longer how they used to be.
Within seconds he was spitting out the teeth of the rich. 2
-spitting has negative connotations suggesting he is angry and has no control.
-Reminds us of golden teeth which are typically rich and positive yet all we feel is he is going hungry.
He toyed with his spoon, then mine, then with the knives, the forks. 3
-list emphasises the range of things he is trying to do to survive.
-Toyed suggests he is playing around trying to find a way to eat.
-Suggests he is suffering.
I poured with a shaking hand, 2
- shaking has connotations of trembling suggesting she is fearful.
-Which emphasises the idea of her scared feelings.
then watched as he picked up the glass, goblet, golden chalice, drank. 3
-alliteration of the g sound is harsh which suggests she is more and more shocked.
-Goblet is very mediaeval yet a chalice makes us think of poison and evil.
-Connotations of the curse.
It was then that I started to scream 1
-word choice of scream holds connotations of yelling in fear which suggests she is terrified.
He sank to his knees. 2
-image. Just as a boat sinks too he is drowning in his power that he no longer holds.
-On his knees is an inferior position and he needs her help so is very vulnerable.
I finished the wine
on my own, hearing him out. 2
enjambment emphasises their separation.
Suggests she is isolated yet in control.
I made him sit
on the other side of the room and keep his hands to himself. 1
Made has connotations of force and so the word made emphasises her control and forcefulness. Sense of termination.
I locked the cat in the cellar. 2
short sentence emphasises her care and thoughtfulness.
She is ensuring her pet is safe. Suggests she is loving.