Exposure quotes, form and structure Flashcards
Our ______ ache, in the ______ iced east ______ that ______ us….
______ we keep______ because the night is ______
Our brains ache, in the merciless iced east winds that knive us….
wearied we keep awake because the night is silent
War ____, rain ____ and ____ sag
War lasts, rain soaks and clouds sag
Pause over ____-____ faces. All their ____ are ____
But nothing ____
Pause over half-known faces. All their eyes are ice
But nothing happens
Dawn _____ in the _____ her _____ army
Attacks _____ more on _____ r _____ of _____
Dawn massing in the east her melancholy army
Attacks once more on shivering ranks of grey
Structure
each stanze starts with a blunt, powerful statement with lots of emotive language following. But each stanza ends with an anti-climactic line. This echoes the anti-climactic nature of the war ( due to the weather?) It reflects nothing happening.
Pararhyme- knive us/nervous - makes us unsettled ( like the effect of war)