ED-Something Quieter Flashcards
‘There’s something quieter than sleep’ + ‘And will not tell its name.’
Implicit metaphor
Pronoun / high modal verb
Slant rhyme
reader assumes it’s death w/in ‘inner room’ but implicit metaphor →ED’s characteristic view death’s unknowability
pronouns = impersonality of corpse + modal ‘will’ = death concealing its mystery
∴ Strong slant rhyme ‘room’ + ‘name’ reinforces speaker’s (+ perhaps ED’s) = cognitively + emotionally at odds w. death’s inscrutability
‘Some touch it, and some kiss it - /some chafe its idle hand’
Anaphoric spondees
Verb connotations
Aggressive interrup. iambic rhythm →speaker. crit. mourner’s actions as sonically intruding upon quietude corpse
‘chafe’ = unwelcome + abrasive nature mourner’s attentions
‘It has a simply gravity/I do not understand!’
Paradox
Simple syntax + full rhyme
Paradox = uncomplicated profundity of death
Full rhyme + simple syntax →tone childlike astonishment, exhorts readers to acknow. unadorned mystery of death, rather than overlaying it w. noisy mourning rituals
‘I would not weep if I were they’ + ‘How rude in one to sob!’
Subjunctive mood
Exclamative sentence
Subj mood = judgement mourner’s grating sobs, combines w. excl. sentence to reprimand them for debasing + distracting from death’s quiet dignity
‘Might scare the quiet fairy / Back to her native wood!’
Contrasting adjectives + metaphors
Enjambment + plosive
Contrasting adjectives →noisy mourners scare ‘fairy’ (soul) back into ‘native wood’ (body)
Enjamb+ plosive ‘back’ accentuates sense of soul’s disturbance ∴performative sobs PGD not just distracting + demeaning, they may also interrupt ↑profound spiritual processes (transmigration of soul)
‘We –prone to periphrasis’ + ‘chat’+ “early dead” +‘remark’+ ‘birds have fled’
Inclusive ‘we’
Verb contrast
Condescending tone+ metaphor
Incl ‘we’ →Sp(and perhaps D ) identifies themselves with the poets ‘prone to periphrasis’ Verb contrast (vacuity of ‘chat’ comp to insightfulness of ‘remark’) estab. condesc. tone in which poetic speaker = superior pedestrian intellects + imaginations of mourners which fixate on youth of speaker (“early dead”) rather than more profound truth: ‘bird’ soul has ‘fled’ to heaven, and/or will be reborn in the cycles of nature (transcend. view)
‘prone to periphrasis’
Latinate diction
H/W apparent confidence speaker’s vate-like capacity discern broader truths = undercut by latinate pomposity ‘Periphrasis’: perhaps speaker fears poetic rendering of truth = evasive, talking around mystery of death rather than illuminating it (in this sense they are no better than the mourners)