Between A Rock and a Hard Place Flashcards
Q4 plan
P1: before injury - experience, skill but slight danger, difficulty, suspense
P2: reaction, danger, fear, pain
‘Between a Rock and a Hard Place’
idiom for difficult decision
‘rock’ - literally & metaphorically
foreshadow bad thing/dilemma
TAP
T: autobiographical account
A: national, adventurous people
P: to inform & entertain slightly bc dramatic
P1:
‘another drop-off’, ‘another refrigerator chockstone’
‘another’ - done before, experience & knowledge
technical language & terminology - specific, expertise
‘I’ll dangle off the chockstone, then take a short fall’
‘I’ll’ - confident
‘dangle’ - contrast assurance, dangerous, vulnerable, precarious, increase tension & suspense
‘short’ - easy, casual
‘stemming’, ‘traverse’, ‘press’, ‘kick’
semantic field of action - swift movement, ease
technical verbs - stability & skilled
‘kick’ - not reserved
‘with a scraping quake’
assonance of ‘scraping quake’ - movement & sound of rock moving - scary
‘quake’ - seismic shift, significant blunder, foreshadow trouble
‘fear shoots my hands over my head.’
‘fear’ is subject - uncontrollable
‘shoots’ - power of fear
mainly monosyllabic - sharp movements, frantic
alliteration of ‘hands over my head’ - mirror heavy breathing? pressure
‘smashes’, ‘ricochets’, ‘crushes’, ‘ensnares’
violent, graphic verbs - chalkstone active verbs - almost personification - predatory - devastating impact
‘my disbelief paralyzes me’
‘disbelief’ - contrast previous confidence - show he thought he was initially secure & the event was a mistake
‘paralyzes’ - stunned, shock, pain
‘the flaring agony throws me into a panic. I grimace and growl.’
assonance of ‘flaring agony’ - sound like a scream - immense pain
alliteration of ‘grimace and growl’ - animalistic, aggressive, loud instinctive reaction
‘anxiety’, ‘frantic’, ‘desperate’
irrational due to fear
‘grunting, ‘Come on…move! Nothing.’
exclamative - passion, strength of feeling, desperation, isolation, frustration
out loud - emotion
ellipsis - dramatic pause & think
‘nothing’ - single word sentence - danger, anticlimactic, abrupt - realise further danger
cliff-hanger
structure
chronological & 1st person - readers experience events with author - drama, suspense, thrill, entertaining
start - complex sentences & terminology vs later longer sentences using semicolons, listing, colons (e.g. ‘time dilates) - slow reading pace allows readers to experience events as author did
short sentences - abrupt - lots of fearful thoughts interrupting mind - irrational spiral into pain - dramatic & alarming
passive voice - uncontrollable passive emotion - out of control