Bayonet charge Flashcards
who wrote bayonet charge
ted hughs
suddenly he awoke and was running raw.
in raw seamed hot khaki his sweat heavy
repetition of raw suggests an animalistic lack of humanity
his sweat heavy suggests the physical impact of his the soldiers
suddenly thrusts the listener into the the action it opens MEDIA RES
so desperate for escape his sweat slows him down
bullet smacking the belly out of the air he lugs a rifle numb as a smashed arm
metaphor creates a tense and violent atmosphere
comedy and relief he hasn’t been killed
assonance slows poem down
in what cold clockwork of the stars and nations
death is unstoppable “clockwork” cannot stop it
patriotism in the fault for that fate
harsh alliteration helps emphasise mechanical imagery
and crawled in a threshing circle its mouth wide
corn being cut it is a biblical reference to life in cut down war photographer has the same reference
Threw up a yellow hare that rolled like a flame
fast movement but slow action
threw up represents the soldiers sickness
links to the iodom mad as a hare
King honour human dignity etcetera drops luxuries 
these are the reasons to go to war
however Hughes is trying to display the fact that they are ridiculous life and living and more important