4 - Woman's Constancy Flashcards
intro
This poem reaches beyond the customary discourse of poetry, the Petrarchan paradigm, and finds metaphor in a foreign discourse, incorporating law for its own end. Superficially, the poem investigates women’s ability to be ‘inconstant’, approaching the issue from a number of viewpoints that frame sexual liberty as both legally and emotionally justifiable (and, in many ways preferable). Although it is clearly a love poem, it is also a product of, and commentary on the lawyerly play that Donne was familiar with. It deals with a common situation in secular love, mocking the fickleness of a love that is merely apparent, not real. The speaker paints a picture of women as deceivers; he has no faith in their ability to be honest and fully devout. However, by questioning where he stands in the relationship, Donne reveals his own instability, emphasised in the final lines when he doesn’t not reject the possibility that he too can be unfaithful.
Now thou has loved me one whole day,
Tomorrow when you leav’st, what wilt thou say?
Wilt thou then antedate some new-made vow?
Or say that now
We are not just those persons which we were?
- Now = transient relationship, hurt reinforced by chronological markers
- One whole day = sarcastic? Post-coital frustration? Hyperbole suggests hurt.
- When thou leav’st = projection that she will leave, insecure
- What wilt thou say? = questions suggest motif of faith and doubt. Longs for resolution
- Antedate = will you come back to me?
- We are not just those persons which we were = dissolves all commitments. Applies lawyerly rhetoric to love, does not work due to the rawness of the emotion. JD lawyer
Or, that oaths made in reverential fear
Of Love, and his wrath, any may forswear?
- Oaths = lawyerly lexicon
- Reverential fears = legalistic interpretation of coercion vs. RE reference to reverence. Made commitment under duress, coerced by God of love. Witty cascade of ideas.
- Love and his wrath = allusion to Cupid. Argument is the defense of duress; the harmful act, though committed, is excused because one was coerced into doing it.
- Wrath = OT judgement, paired with classical Cupid and legalistic love
Or, as true deaths true marriages untie,
So lovers’ contracts, images of those,
Bind but till sleep, death’s image, them unloose?
- Deaths true marriages untie = Wonders if she will try to argue that just as marriages are dissolved at death, so contracts between lovers are dissolved during sleep, which resembles death. Post-coital
- Contracts = legal
- Untie/unloose = softens the finality of love’s terminations by the use of metaphor. Erotic unloosing suggests post-coital, sensual undressing vs. freedom after waking up, untied from relationship
- Bind but till-sleep = sleep is a mimickery of death, waking up after sleep means relationship is dissolved. Renaissance idea of sleep as depth = jocular argument as JD suggests ‘til death do us part’ can be applied to a relationship after you’ve both had a kid.
Or, your own end to justify,
For having purposed change and falsehood, you
Can have no way but falsehood to be true?
- End = is justifying own end in the sense of the goal of change, and getting a new beloved
- Falsehood (…) falsehood = word play, parallel line structure. In order to be true to herself, she must be false to him. Love as a game
Vain lunatic, against these ‘scapes I could
Dispute and conquer, if I would,
Which I abstain to do,
For by tomorrow, I may think so too.
- Vain lunatic = signals end of poignant questioning and complaint, turning point. Angry? Defensive? Sarcastic?
- I could/if I would = conditional, does not have energy to dispute
- Which I abstain to do = power of voice
- Tomorrow = compressed time
- I may think so too = if male, he does not remove the possibility of him rejecting her. Modal verb, threatening tone vs. underlying emotion and hurt, fear of uncertainty. Swift reversal.
themes
- Love and Relationships
- Motif of Faith and Doubt
- Influence of Social Setting
- Conventionality
Anxiety
language general
- Hyperbole (Generates sense of hurt)
- Definite Verbs (vulnerability of poet persona)
- Compressed time (awareness of end and underlying vulnerability)
- Modal verb ‘may’ (generates fear, In a relationship nothing Is certain)
- Erotically charged words (e.g untie, unloose; Is the poem post-coital?!)
- Images of freedom (desire for no binding commitment= JD the libertine lawyer)
- Repetition and word play
language, desire to pin down uncertainty
- Temporal Markers (‘one whole day’ ‘tomorrow’ awareness of the transience of love)
- Conditional ‘as If’ (uncertainty of love)
rational language in tension with emotion
- Rational/legalistic language is in tension with emotion
• Legalistic lexicon/lawyerly style ( language of law falls short of explaining reality of love, legal discourse cannot capture realms of experience, influence of social setting)
• Religious Lexicon (suggests commitment made under divine duress, witty)
• Language of rhetoric (e.g ‘or’ and ‘for’: advance rational argument, logical progression that sits In tension with the emotional subject matter)
Skills of rhetoric. H, topic is emotional. Tension between rational, legalistic mode and difficulty of reducing relationships down to the rational.
tension between male/female voice
- Uncertainty in relationship/legalistic uncertainty
- Law = male job, women = illiterate, but JD could be adopting persona of woman
- If male, it is a hymn of hate. Title becomes ironic, comment on women’s infidelity
- If speaker is female, the poem is about the men at court: amorous males who cannot commit. Suggests writing as construct - Modernism
title
Ambiguous irony: Is the title ironic, as JD goes on to show how women can get it on as many times as they fancy (why abstain when you can legally go again?). Our treatment of the title hinges on our interpretation of the poet voice: if it is female, the poem is about amorous men who cannot commit, and the title is literal as the poem eulogises female Constancy. However, If the voice is male, it’s just another hymn of hatred of women’s inconstancy, and the title is Ironic. If male, it is a hymn of hate. Title becomes ironic, comment on women’s infidelity. Suggests writing as construct - Modernism
structure, rhyme
o Some rhyme (desire to couple)
o Half rhyme (loss of control as rhyme scheme entirely disintegrates in middle of poem vs. complications with love, hurt)
o Rhyme at end = sense of resolution, questions disappear
o Concluding couplets (attempt to rationalise)
structure, general
• Lyric poem of 17 lines, rejects sonnet form = traditional love poem
• Dramatic monologue (no set structure and varying line length reflects uncertainty of love, contrast p.p’s longing for certainty)
• Tone= sarcastic, satirical, paradoxical and poignant (JD is a very confused young man)
• Proliferation of question marks (desire for resolution)
• Parallel syntactical placement and repetition (of ‘falsehood’, emphasise doubt)
Short/long lines = uncertainty in relationship
quotes - ‘Now thou hast loved me one whole day, tomorrow when thou leav’st, what wilt thou say?’
- Hyperbole generates a sense of hurt, reinforced by the definite adverb ‘when’, which underlines the inevitability of the woman leaving, and thus the p.p’s insecurity