Where the picnic was Flashcards
Context
-autobiographical
-1912
-novelist and poet
-South West England
-wife died in 1912
-Industrial Revolution
Form
-Elegy
-3 stanzas of unequal length
-irregular rhyme scheme
-enjambment
‘Where we made the fire,
In the summer time,’
‘I slowly climb
Through winter mire’
-juxtaposition
-1st person plural to 1st person single
-adverb - sense of dreariness
-summer and winter - past and present
‘And scan and trace
The forsaken place
Quite readily.’
-internal rhyme/rhyming couplet
-speeds it up and is really trying to search for signs of the past
-forsaken - he feels he has abandoned the place
-adverb - happy to be there (closure) even though it’s bleak
‘Now a cold wind blows,
And the grass is gray’
-Pathetic fallacy
-colour symbolism - grass is lifeless
‘Yes, I am here
Just as last year,
And the sea breathes brine
From its strange straight line’
-Interjection
-personification
-language connotes continuity
-sibilance
‘But two have wandered far…
Into urban roar
Where no picnics are
And one - has shut her eyes
For evermore’
-Metaphor/onomatopoeia - to him, the city is a place of noise and industry
-euphemism - pointing out his wife has died for the first time (doesn’t even want to say her name because it’s too painful)
-enjambment - emphasises finality