Steward Island Flashcards
context
-moves to UK at 5 but returned to NZ
-2 unhappy marriages
-then returns to UK as adult
-S.I is 3rd largest island in NZ
form
-free verse
-dialogue
-enjambment
-caesura
‘But look at all this beauty’
said the hotel manager’s wife’
-opens with frontal coordinate conjunction - suggests a defence
-dialogue - engaging
-sets up the idea that this poem is to do with conflict
‘True: there was a fine bay,
all hills and atmosphere’
-Adjective - suggests concession
-‘fine’ is a homonym - could be elegant or average - undermining suggestion that it is beautiful
-vague language
‘As for me, I walked on the beach;
it was too cold to swim. My
seven-year-old collected shells
and was bitten by sandflies’
-shift in tone
-typical ‘holiday’ behaviour
-juxtaposed with the negativity that it was too cold to swim
-enjambment - drawing attention to age, which makes child seem vulnerable
-makes sense with the juxtaposition that the child was then bitten
‘my four-year-old paddled, until
a mad seagull jetted down
to jab it’s claws and beak into
his head.’
-lowering age, escalating violence
-enjambment places focus on seagull
-personification makes seagull seem more dangerous
-j alliteration - draws attention to violence/emotive verbs
‘I had already
decided to leave the country.’
-declarative
-adverb
-past perfect tense
-suggests the reason she’s had such a bad holiday is because she’s already feeling negative
-enjambment focusses on decided (demonstrating her certainty)