Remains Flashcards
what is the context for Remains ?
- he wanted to help raise awareness of the effects of war on people
- documentary about the impact of war returning home, poem based of Guardsman Tromans
- raise awareness of PTSD
what was the perspective of Remains & how is it used for effect?
- dramatic monologue & present tense
- uses present participles ‘legs it’ ‘tosses’ and ‘are’ - sense of being an account from memory in a flashback - symptoms of PTSD
- poem suggests that the speaker needs to go over the events hes been through in his head to order them & lessen the impact
- interpretation strengthened by the change in his perspective - suggesting he is starting to accept responsibility as well as letting go of suppressed emotions
- accepting his guilt & suffering also includes accepting that he is suffering, colloquial way this is portrayed is like a stream of consciousness, uncensored memories
how is the opening in Remains used for effect ?
- opens in media res
- confuses reader, doesn’t know what is going on which mirrors the soldiers for those who are not emotionally prepared for what will come after war
- Armitage, may be commenting on society & how soldiers are launched into confusing situations
- lack of compassion the military has for the individuals they are risking in strategic situations
- media res reflects the chaos of war & the unpredictability
‘on another occasion we get sent out’ - typical operation life of a soldier, repeated exposure to suffering & horror - no help recieved
how is the ending of Remains used for effect ?
- structure of stanza breaks down - final stanza is 2 lines whereas the rest of the poem is 4 lines
- mirrors the breakdown of soldiers in war reflected in break down of the structure
- ending reveals the source of his internal chaos as being his guilt
‘bloody’ - adjective within ‘his bloody life in my bloody hands’ - either describes the violent gruesome nature of death or using it as a slang/curse
‘hands’ - symbolic guilt - shifted from sharing the blame with others at the beginning of the poem to taking sole responsibility for the death of the soldier
- PTSD can shift perspective and can change memories
how does the writer use the structure of shifting blame for effect in Remains ?
- at the start: perspective begins trying to excuse what he did and share the blame with others
- ‘my self and somebody else and somebody else’ ‘all three of us’ ‘three of a kind’
repeated references to their being others allieniates his responsibility - try to minimize his role - speaker trying to ignore his guilt soldier cant show emotion but must remain brave
SHIFTS: - his feeling shifts to him feeling entirely responsible - blames himself entirely
- emphasizes the guilt he feels and how PTSD can warp how a person views past events
how does Remains use enjambment for effect ?
‘and i swear//i see every round as it rips through his life’
- causes tension, builds up to violent imagery
- also suggests that the speaker is unable to separate events, as sentence flows his memories flow - unable to isolate a memory
- enjambment occurs at key moments & specifically breaks up the sentences about the death & suffering
how is caesura in Remains used for effect ?
‘Then i’m home on leave. But i blink’
- going home should be the end of this memory of the event & the extent of its impact on him, because war shouldn’t impact him once he leaves
- however the conjunction ‘But’ at the start of the 2nd stanza shows how war continues to impact him even when he should be able to escape it
- leave should be a time of relaxation and recovery
‘But i blink’
- creates doubt that this will actually happen, the actual response is separated through enjambment
caesura - interrupts the sentence, just like his memories interrupt his everyday
- forces reader to reflect and consider conflict
‘three of a kind’ ‘are all of the same kind’ - Remains - impact of war on soldiers
- soldiers used as tools of war, soldier loses their individuality & humanity
- trained soldiers think the same way as they are made to, suggesting they must suspect everyone as being an enemy
- war breeds a certain kind & changes them all into more aggressive & distrusting people
- soldiers don’t question the morality of killing
- it is only after he starts to question the implications of what he did and his thoughts are altered by PTSD he has suffered as a consequence of the conflict he fought in
how does Remains reflect the memory/psychological impact ?
- memory can be corrupted by trauma: can be observed by the readers shift from deflecting to fully accepting the blame
- investigates how PTSD can isolate you and make you feel entirely alone, and how it will change your view on events due to intensified guilt
- ## memory allows conflict to invade the domestic sphere
‘probably armed, possibly not’ - Remains - Guilt
- The speaker begins by denying guilt, but eventually reveals his emotional suffering.
- Reflects the expectation for soldiers to appear strong and hide their emotions.
- Describes killing a looter with the phrase: “probably armed, possibly not”.
- The order of words (“probably” before “possibly”) suggests he’s trying to justify his actions.
- Introduces doubt — the looter might have been innocent, increasing the speaker’s guilt.
- The repetition (anaphora) of this phrase later shows how the memory haunts him.
- Highlights his obsession and regret over whether the killing was justified.
- The poem’s cyclical structure mirrors how he is mentally trapped, stuck in the same thoughts.
- The poem’s central theme is guilt, which continues to torment the speaker after the event.