remains Flashcards
‘then im home on leave’
the narrator feels that going home will help which it doesn’t - caesura
‘probably armed, possibly not’
repeated towards the start and end of the poem - gives the poem a cyclical structure - suggests the trauma the soldier is experiencing is inescapable
‘blood shadow’ - ‘here in my head’
physical mark on the street - memory, the little remains
‘somebody else’ - ‘his bloody life in my bloody hands’
repetition of somebody else is used to deflect the blame from just himself. shows he doesnt want to accept the blame. - second quote features at towards the end of the poem, this shows a shift, he takes responsibility, shows that him being alone forces him to deal with the consequences
‘three of a kind all letting fly…rips through his life’
stanza break causes the reader to stop and emphasises the huge event that has ruined his life - forced break reflects the broken man the soldier became - reader is saying that the effects of war do not disappear after it is over.
where does the action start
immediately puts the reader in the action, resembling the lack of ease that the soldiers would have felt in a warzone
what does the chaotic opening to the poem reflect
shows how war is uncontrolled and unorganised, it is all chaos
what does the shift from conversational language to horrific imagery mean and give example of each
has juxtaposed 2 types of language to highlight the before and after effect of war - ‘legs it up’ - shows how it is a normal occurrence for soldiers and then ‘every round rips through his life’