PAPER 2(READING)-DAFOREST-highlight it in extract Flashcards
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Direct Adress
Direct address is when you talk directly to the reader, using the pronouns ‘we’, ‘you’ or ‘us’. This is a great technique for persuading the reader, as it suggests that the reader and writer are on the same side.
Us and We
When that happens to us, we have to stick together.
In this phrase, the pronouns ‘us’ and ‘we’ are used to directly address the reader.
Direct address is used to make the reader feel like part of a team with the writer/speaker
The collective pronouns ‘us’ and ‘we’ make it seem like the writer and the reader have a common goal
The common goal is reinforced by the use of two collective pronouns.
You
How would you feel?
In this phrase, the pronoun ‘you’ is used to directly address the reader.
Direct address is used to make the reader feel like the writer/speaker is talking directly to them–* it suggests that* the advice and information the writer has is directly applicable for, and important to, the reader.
The collective pronoun ‘you’ makes it seem like the writer has a direct message for the reader, specifically for them.
We
We must not give up.
- In this phrase, the pronoun ‘we’ is used to directly address the reader.*
- Direct address is used to make the reader feel like part of a team with the writer/speaker.*
- The collective pronoun ‘we’ makes it seem like the writer and the reader have a common goal*
Which phrase uses direct address?
what is the time?
surely you are tired?
Is jimmy always this annoying?
Surely you are tired?
Direct adress is usually pronouns
TIPS FOR DIRECT ADRESS
Use a variety of pronouns
Use a variety of second-person and collective pronouns (‘you’, ‘we’, ‘us’).
Choose vocabulary effectively
Your choice of vocabulary is vital in creating your language devices effectively.
Use the appropiate pronoun
Decide whether you want to talk at your reader, or whether you want to be a team with your reader – then select the appropriate pronoun.
Second-person pronoun
You
ALLITERATION
Alliteration is the occurrence of the same letter or sound at the beginning of words near to each other. These are the same sounds, not necessarily the same letters (e.g. ‘ph’ and ‘f’ may sound the same in some words).
Alliteration of plosive sounds
The dawn drank the darkness as the sun escaped her dungeon.
- In this phrase, the sound ‘d’ is repeated four times.*
- Plosive sounds (such as d/b/t/p) are quite abrupt and strong. They grab the reader’s attention, especially when repeated.*
- In this phrase, we want to emphasise *the darkness and negativity so we can highlight the change the sun brings.
Alliteration of fricative sounds
He fumbled with the photo and froze.
In this phrase, the sound ‘f’ is repeated.
In addition, the ‘f’ sound is also created with the ‘ph’ in ‘photo’.
Fricative sounds (such as f/v/th) can either be quite soft and airy, or they can be aggressive (especially f/v, which you can only produce if you bare your teeth – an aggressive action).
Alliteration of affricative sounds
Alliteration of affricative sounds
He juggled gently with gigantic jellyfish.
- In this phrase, the sound ‘j’ is repeated.* In addition, the ‘j’ sound is also created with the soft letter ‘g’ (in ‘gigantic’, the first ‘g’ works because it is soft, but the second ‘g’ is not alliterative because it is a harder sound).
- Affricative sounds (such as j) can be quite strange and jarring – they interrupt the softer flow of text and grab the reader’s attention, especially when repeated.*
TIPS FOR USING ALLITERATION
Focus on the sound
Focus on the sound you are trying to create. Is your alliteration going to be smooth, airy, aggressive, or jarring? The type of sounds you choose to repeat will affect the mood of your writing.
Choose your vocabulary wisely
Your choice of vocabulary is vital in creating your language devices effectively.
Plan where the alliteration should go
Use alliteration carefully – before you put it into your writing, think about where it should go. What do you want to draw attention to?
Yarvis yanked his ankle and Yolanda yelled out in shock.
Jarring alliteration
When using alliteration, the type of sounds you choose to repeat will affect the___ of your writing.
tone/mood
What does the alliteration draw attention to in this phrase?
Matthew made mellow music with his miniature microphone.
The mellowness of Matthew’s music
(Is it because there is more m near the subject music?***??__
Examples
Hades TuRned Red with Rage
The Child Cried Convincingly
The child Smiled Suspiciously
What type of sound does this alliteration create?
Yarvis yanked his ankle and Yolanda yelled out in shock.
Jarring (tryout the different examples and try identify: jarring airy smooth fluid
FACTS
FACTS
A fact is a statement that cannot be argued with – it is true and can be proven. By putting facts in your writing, you add credibility and truth to your ideas, meaning your reader trusts you more.
Women live longer than men
Generally, women live longer than men.
According to statistics, women generally have a longer lifespan than men. This is a statistical fact, proven by birth and death records – it cannot be argued with.
A statistical fact like this adds credibility to your argument.No one can disagree with your statement because evidence has been collected to support this – it has been proven.
Statistical facts make you really seem to know what you are talking about, meaning that your reader is more likely to trust your advice.