Mean Time by Carol Ann Duffy Flashcards
How would the current life of the poetic voice in the The Captain best be described?
- Disappointing (Contemptuous reference to wife and children, “my thick kids/my stale wife”
What is the form of The Captain?
Dramatic monologue
Why is the poetic voice of The Captain unusual?
Male poetic voice written by a female poet
Why does Duffy use a masculine poetic voice in The Captain?
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- Masculinity
- Masculine preoccupation w/ power & glory
What is the narrative of The Captain?
Middle aged-man reliving his schooldays in the 60s
What are the key ideas of stanza one of The Captain?
Set scene of 60s -> hope and cultural/economic resurgence after post-war austerity (Popular allusion -> pop songs of the time)
Poetic voice’s sexual awakening
How is an upbeat tone created in stanza one of The Captain?
- Musical onomatopoeia “Do Wah Diddy Diddy”
- Sexual focus “Oh Pretty Woman”, “Baby Love”
- Asyndetic list creates sense of
energy
How does the poetic voice in The Captain prove to the listener their breadth of knowledge?
“the Beatles were everywhere else”, “the B-side of the Supremes one”
Range of different musical genres that the poetic voice references -> breadth of knowledge.
“B-side” -> lesser-known song, emphasises the boastful nature of the persona
How is the poetic voice juxtaposed in stanza one of The Captain?
“Hang on. Come See About Me?”
Minor sentence shows hesitation, juxtaposes from previous arrogance; interrogative further reinforces lack of confidence.
How is the eventual downfall, as perceived by the poetic voice, foreshadowed in stanza one of The Captain?
“Gargling with Vimto.”
Minor sentence -> metaphor of life gone flat, juxtaposed with “fizzing hope”, reinforces energy of past, contrasted with falter in interrogative
How is the arrogance of the poetic voice fully asserted in stanza one of The Captain?
“clever smell of my satchel”
- Hyperbolic sensory imagery -> abundant knowledge - Personification of smell -> sense of imagination & lively youthful nature.
How is the poetic voice further established as a man of the the 1960s in stanza one of The Captain?
“Convent girls.”
Minor sentence -> feeling of superiority the poetic voice experienced
Power -> Catholic girls break their vow of
celibacy
Reinforcing hierarchy of sexes in 60s
How is the sexual awakening of the poetic voice reinforced in stanza one of The Captain?
“my lips numb as a two hour snog.”
Simile reinforces sexual
imagery of “convent girls.”
What are the main ideas of stanzas two and three of The Captain?
- Time in classroom as quiz team captain
- Childhood’s potential and energy, young boy optimistic & confident
How is an ambiguous phrase used to describe the hyperbolic description of the poetic voice’s childhood in The Captain?
“No snags.”
- Minor sentence
- Problems w/ hair (pulled hair forward with steel comb)
- Problems in general?
How is a series of declarative minor sentences used to demonstrate the poetic voice’s depth of knowledge in The Captain?
“The Nile rises in April. Blue and white.”
- Depth of knowledge expanded quickly due to short sentence length increasing the pace of reading/speaking
How is symbolism used to reinforce the poetic voice’s sexual awakening in The Captain?
“beat so fast they blur in flight”
- Sexual symbolism of heartbeat during romantic encounters with the convent girls
- Symbolic of academic prowess w/ ideas blurring mentally due to speed of recall1
How is asyndetic listing used to reinforce the poetic voice’s breadth of knowledge in The Captain?
“the capitals, the Kings and Queens, the dates.”
- Cumulative effect of different topics (geography/history) creates sense of overwhelming quantity of knowledge
How is hyperbolic repetition used to reinforce the poetic voice’s feelings of superiority in The Captain?
“saluted again and again.”
- Demands respect from teacher, military links, foregrounds interpretation of road names
How are discourse features used in The Captain?
“Sir!…Correct.”
- Adjacency pair of free indirect speech, preferred response
How is a fronted adverbial used in The Captain to convey the superiority of the poetic voice?
“Later, I whooped…”
- Fronted adverbial, demonstrates how the poetic voice excelled inside and outside of school
- Juxtaposition of self-discipline in school and reckless abandon outside of school
How is popular allusion used to convey a sense of heroism in The Captain?
“a cowboy”
- Popular allusion to popular game Cowboys and Indians
- Popular allusion to popularity of western films featuring cowboys during the 60s
How is hyperbole used to convey a sense of superiority in The Captain?
“mounted it running in one jump”
- Potential sexual connotation of material verb “mounted” could suggest both the hyperbolic nature of the description of the poetic voice’s athleticism, but also his sexual performance
How are Latin declensions used in The Captain to convey a sense of the anachronistic nature of the poetic voice’s knowledge?
“Dominus domine dominum”
- Latin is obsolete
- Perspective of self as “Lord” -> translation of Latin noun-verb
How is ellipsis used in The Captain to convey the poetic voice?
“Dave Dee Dozy…”
- Ellipsis demonstrates poetic voice’s forgetfulness, popular allusion to pop group of the 60s
How are possessive pronouns used in The Captain to show ownership and relationships?
"”my mother kept my / mascot Gonk / on the TV set for a year”
- Repetition of possessive pronouns -> ownership & superiority -> blames mother for enhanced arrogance
- Popular allusion to furry toys of the 60s
How is popular allusion used in The Captain to make the poetic voice feel real?
"Dave Dee Dozy" - Music group of the 60s "my mascot Gonk" - Furry toys of the 60s "a cowboy" - Game "Cowboys and Indians" - Popularity of western films featuring cowboys during the 60s "Do Wah Diddy Diddy, Baby Love..." - Pop songs of the 60s "A Hard Day's Night" - Beatles song "I smiled as wide as a child who went missing on the way home from school" - Moors Murders of 60s
How is prepositional repetition used in The Captain?
“up Churchill Way, up Nelson Drive, over pink pavements…”
- Arrogance suggested in “over” military leaders reference
How is irony used in The Captain?
“Stamped the pawprints of badgers and skunks in the mud”
- Irony of abuse of power coupled with popular allusion to the animal print soles of children’s shoes of the 1960s
How are possessive pronouns used in The Captain?
“My country.”
- Hyperbolic sense of arrogance, emphasised by orthographic sentence
How is pathos created in text receivers of The Captain?
“I want it back. The one with all the answers.”
-Declarative sentence function -> desperation
Where is the volta in The Captain?
“My name was in red on Lucille Green’s jotter.”
- Sudden shift to past tense
- Reality into focus, potential allusion to imaginary nature of relationship (red -> anger/love/lust)
How is popular allusion used in The Captain to make the poem feel intimate?
“I smiled as wide as a child who went missing on the way home from school.”
- Allusion to Moors Murders -> nationwide shock -> Poetic voice’s shock at time’s progression, mirrors the mindset of text receivers -> intimacy
How are premodifiers used in The Captain to build relationships?
“my stale wife”
- Pre-modifier -> disgust and passionless relationship from the poetic voice’s perspective
“my thick kids wince”
- Pre-modifier -> disgust and hate-filled relationship -> glottal stop creates a harsh sound
How are minor sentences used in The Captain to make the poetic voice seem real?
“Nobody.”
Reflects poetic voice’s desperation to find those who share his interest in general knowledge, lack of interest of others.
How is the poetic voice’s desperation communicated and developed in The Captain?
“How can we know the dancer from the dance?”
- Rhetorical question -> hopelessness
- Interrogative -> desperate search for answers and certainty
“Name the Prime Minister of Rhodesia.”
- Declarative sentence function -> attempt to connect with anything concrete and certain
“How many florins in a pound?”
- Final rhetorical question and interrogative defines the poem and most succinctly communicates the resounding message -> hopelessness at lack of understanding of time’s progression and inability to understand the present situation and engage meaningfully with it, especially contrasted to a seemingly perfect past
Who is the poetic voice in Beachcomber?
Elderly woman
What is the narrative of Beachcomber?
Elderly woman talking to herself and younger self as she tries to recall her past (COMBING THE BEACH FOR HER MEMORIES)
What is the prevailing message/emotion of Beachcomber?
Frustration with time and oneself -> time passes, harder to remember, even as we try harder
What is significant about the graphology of Beachcomber?
Carefully chosen line lengths -> waves ebbing and flowing (tides on the beach) -> symbolic of memories (some recalled in detail/run far up the beach -> surprise ourselves; some recalled a little/never reach the shore)
Concrete poem - shaped to represent a concrete noun
Choppy, not smooth -> Friends, family and previous self taken away by dementia -> sea erodes the coastline
What is significant about the pattern of questions in Beachcomber?
3 questions (Start, Middle, End) -> 3 stages of life (Childhood, Adulthood, Elderly)
1st question answered -> inexperience of childhood
2nd & 3rd questions answered -> life experience
How is the poetic voice presented in Beachcomber?
“Trow.”
- Archaic verb -> Age of poetic voice
- Poetic voice’s frustration at inability to remember-imperative, minor sentence
How are the memories presented in Beachcomber?
Vivid, recall every detail (sensory-sight and sound)
“and not in sepia”
- Reference to development of old photographs - reinforces age of poetic voice
How are the lines between material and mental verbs blurred in Beachcomber?
“If you think…do it without getting off that chair”
- No actual physical exertion -> compared to mental strain
How are interrogatives used in Beachcomber?
“How old are you now?”
- Poetic voice questions restrictions of old age
What is the significance of ellipsis in Beachcomber?
“This is what happens-“
- Enjambment demonstrates how life slips away w/ age - Pathos in listener
What is the significance of the pronoun use in Beachcomber?
“the child”, “Now she is kneeling.”
- Third person reference to themselves - dissociation of past and present selves -> dementia
“If you think till it hurts”
- Poetic voice addresses her past self, potentially also the listener, acknowledges universal experience of attempting to relive memories
- Difficult, painful -> metaphorical pain barrier
“scare yourself”
- Overwhelming experience, triggered by a single word, fear at lack of mental control -> a passenger/prisoner of her own mind -> isolation from reality/other people -> dementia
Poem is intimate, validates text receiver’s struggles (trying to go back and relive past experiences-futile)
How is sibilance used in Beachcomber?
“sound of the sea…describe”
- Hidden sibilance and direct sibilance -> sound iconicity, poetic voice hissing with frustration/self-hatred
What is the significance of the use of imperatives in Beachcomber?
“Get it into your head”
- Poetic voice’s frustration that they cannot remember, commanding
“Open your eyes.”
- Given up, resigned tone
What is significant about the use of minor sentences in Beachcomber?
“Harder.”
- Minor sentence, isolated graphologically, represents poetic voice’s mental exertion in remembering past life
What is significant about the use of colour imagery in Beachcomber?
“The red spade/scooping a hole in the sand”
- Bold, memorable colour -> irony (almost forgotten)
- Imagist poetry (sequence of images presented by poetic voice to text receiver)
What is significant about the use of repetition in Beachcomber?
“You remember that cardigan, yes?/ You remember that cardigan.”
- Sense of pride at remembering something important
Where is the volta in Beachcomber?
“But this is as close as you get.”
- Tragic effect of age on memory reinforced
What is significant about the use of pre-modifiers in Beachcomber?
“Those older, those shaking, hands cannot touch,”
- Cruelty of physical effects of time
- Pre-modifying adjectival phrases
- Use of caesura emphasises the shaking breaths
- Intertwining of physical and mental effects - reality becomes blurred
What is significant about the use of anaphora in Beachcomber?
“or the spade/or the sand/or the seashell on the shore”
- Stream of consciousness, unordered list
- Disruption of logical hyponymic relationship within a semantic field
- Enjambment reinforces these effects
- Poetic voice’s desperate urgency, grasp thoughts before they disappear (tumbling from brain to page)
- Symbolic of blurring of past with age and onset of dementia
What is significant about the use of discourse features in Beachcomber?
“and what/what would you have to say,”
- False start -> incoherent speech, acceptance of futility of recalling memories
What is significant about the use of ambiguous language in Beachcomber?
“The girl suddenly holding a conch, listening, sssh.”
- Phonologically ambiguous:
- Listening for the sound of the sea
- Calming herself after the sudden emotional memory she has unexpectedly recalled
“Exactly.”
- Interrogative sentence, given sense of urgency by enjambment, is text receiver’s focus