In The Snack Bar Flashcards
What is the focus of Stanza 2?
Author takes the old man down the stairs. They go back upstairs. All the senses are overwhelming.
What is the focus of Stanza 3?
Describes old mans life and says how hard it is as he’s helpless.
What is the focus of Stanza 1?
Old man wants to go to toilet.
“A cup capsizes”
Alliteration mimics the sound. It falls easily like the man would.
“Formica”
Cheap. Gives a sense of the setting.
“Dull clatter”
Cheap. You don’t care about the sound but the reader does.
“few” “crowded”
Contrast. Many people are there but only a few care.
“trying”
Struggling. People don’t help.
“Slowly”
He has to do everything slowly. His life is slow.
“no power.”
He is weak.
“as far as he can get”
He isn’t fully standing, he can’t.
“dismal hump”
Life is dismal.
“Looming”
His hump is always there casting a shadow.
“monstrous animal caught in a tent”
Scary. Makes you want to stay away and not help.
“He sways slightly”
Feeble. Sibilance draws attention to it.