In Mrs Tilscher's Class Flashcards
You could travel up the Blue Nile
Second Person/Metaphor
“You” - the use of second person invites the readers to picture themselves in a primary school environment where they probably had made positive memories and had a positive relationship with their teacher.
“Blue Nile” - suggests that the students were so captivated by the way their teacher taught that they felt like they were truly there.
“blue” symbolises calm and peace that Duffy felt in Mrs Tilscher’s class.
The word choice of “travel” could also be a reference for the children’s journey from childhood into adulthood.
Chanted
Word choice
suggests the rhymes and songs we known so well from childhood.
Tana. Ethiopia. Khartoum. Aswan.
Minor Sentences
The minor sentences emphasise each place individually showing that the way in Mrs Tilscher taught was effective. Could also be a reference to the idea that a child’s memories are short and sharp.
Skittle of milk
Metaphor
References that the amount of milk that children recieved was very small. Calling it a “skittle” makes it sound more fun as it is a game Duffy used to play when she was in primary school.
the chalky Pyramids rubbed into dust
Metaphor
Mrs Tilscher drew Pyramids for the children so that they could imagine what they looked like and then she rubbed them out. Just as quickly as the lesson about the Pyramids was forgotten and the children moved on, so too did the children’s innoncence fade as they moved on from childhood into adulthood.
A window opened
This is the first mention of the outside world implying that Mrs Tilscher was slowly introducting the children to the outside world.
The laugh of a bell swung by
Personification
Shows that there is a cheerful atmosphere as the children’s happiness and laughter is echoed throughout the corrridor.
Enthralling books.
Short sentence/Word choice
“Enthralling” suggests that Duffy was captivated by reading and therefore, even in primary school she had a particular interest in literature.
The classroom glowed like a sweetshop.
Simile
Just as a sweetshop is bright, colourful and the children love it so too, did the classroom become an environment that the children were excited about.
“glowed” could be a reference to the children’s eyes which were ‘lit up’ from excitement.
Sugar Paper. Coloured Shapes.
Short sentences
Emphasises that the classroom was a magical place for the children and the use of the short sentences highlights that the memories from childhood are just snapshots.
Brady and Hindley faded
The mention of the Moors murders shows that anything evil that happened, the children ignored or would forget about it as their childhood was too beautiful to dwell over the evil parts. The fact that there is evil and that they are beginning to acknowledge it shows that they are slowly beginning to grow up as they begin to have a better understanding of the world around them.
like the faint, uneasy smudge of a mistake
Just as a mistake can be rubbed out so too, was the thought of evil and murder eradicated from the safety of the classroom.
The fact that it is “uneasy” shows that the idea lingers on and that the children are growing up as they begin to understand that the world is not a perfect place.
Mrs Tilscher loved you.
Short sentence
Creates a clear statement that Mrs Tilscher clearly cared for her pupils.
Gold star
Symbolism
Duffy was honoured to be rewarded by her teacher. The fact that it is a “gold star” reminds her of a magicians hat, thus implying that the classroom seemed magical to them.
The scent of a pencil, slowly, carefully, shaved.
Metaphor
Just as a pencil can be sharpened “slowly, carefully, shaved” so too does a child’s mind mature gradually as he sharpens his knowledge of the outside world.
The fact it was “slowly” suggests that the child was thinking about things when he/she was sharpening the pencil.