Improved Sentences from My Writes

Question 1

举例：

主体, who+ 描述

For example, volunteers who watched funny movies showed significant improvement in their internal health, similar to the effects of 15 to 30 minutes of exercise.

Answer 1

例如，观看搞笑电影的志愿者的内部健康状况有了明显改善，这与锻炼 15 至 30 分钟的效果类似。

Question 2

用来介绍一个方法：

方法 and 有很多研究证明了这个方法

Laughing is a simple remedy for maintaining a positive emotional state, and numerous studies have proven its effectiveness.

Answer 2

笑是保持积极情绪状态的一种简单疗法，许多研究已经证明了它的有效性。

Question 3

介绍完一方面，接着介绍另一方面的过度句：

While negative emotions can affect heart health, the power of positive emotions can be harnessed to reduce the risk of heart disease.

Answer 3

消极情绪会影响心脏健康，而积极情绪的力量则可用于降低心脏病风险。

Question 4

表示猜想： Perhaps+猜想，or +实际情况

Perhaps the girl who caught my gaze loved me, or maybe it was just my imagination.

Answer 4

也许是那个吸引我目光的女孩爱我，也许只是我的想象。

Question 5

猜测现在情况的原因：现在怎么样，possibly due to + 原因

I feel fatigued today, possibly due to the two weeks of commuting between school and home or staying up late.

Answer 5

我今天感觉很疲劳，可能是因为这两周往返于学校和家之间或熬夜的缘故。

Question 6

总结我分析了什么的原因,引出我接下来讨论什么： In today’s diary, I explained why I prefer not to attend classroom lessons. The reasons I prefer studying at home will be discussed later.

Answer 6

在今天的日记中，我解释了为什么我不喜欢在教室上课。我喜欢在家学习的原因将在后面讨论。

Question 7

描述什么东西对我造成负面影响：
Staying in school is quite different from staying at home, which I think negatively affects my ability to complete daily tasks.

Answer 7

留在学校与留在家里完全不同，我认为这对我完成日常任务的能力产生了负面影响。

Question 8

结尾：说因为我不公平，我要离开
I am committed to fairness, and unfortunately, this experience has shown me that such fairness is lacking here.

Answer 8

我致力于公平，不幸的是，这次经历告诉我，这里缺乏这种公平。

Question 9

表达不满：主语+ be disillusioned by ….

I am deeply disillusioned by the situation regarding the authorship of my review article.

Answer 9

我对我的评论文章的作者身份深感失望。