If-, Rudyard Kipling Flashcards
Meaning (3x bullet points)
- Advice a father would give to his son
- Growing maturity & shaping one’s identity
- Everything epitomises Britishness
- Stoicism (showing strength in face of hardship)
Context
- Written when British empire at its peak
- Victorian era: era of stoicism (endure pain/hardship without complaining)
- “Stiff upper lip” = idiom
- Inspired by Sir Jameson = doing his best to conquer = noble despite fact he failed
Significance of title?
‘If-‘ - Enigmatic title
- Conditional conjunction: Consequence/result = good or bad
- Consequences of circumstances revealed on final line
- = sense of drama & anticipation
- Consequences of circumstances revealed on final line
- Hypen: Connects two ideas together
Imagery #1
- Personification: “Triumph” & “Disaster”
- Opposites
- Promote caution: be unfazed by both & you’ll be same
- Described as “two impostors”
- Success & failure = never what you think they are
- Both hidden drawbacks = shouldn’t be too excited or disappointed
- With these 2 words = comes disruption/change but both temporary
- Success & failure = never what you think they are
Imagery #2
“heart and nerve and sinew”
- Rule of 3 + Polysyndeton
- Emphasises all details necessary to make a man
- Qualities man must have when others give up
- i.e. Imploring reader to endure
- Force all aspects of being to keep going even when gone
- Synecdoche (figure of speech - part of something represents the whole)
- Poet saying “muscles” or “body,”
- “heart”
- Emotion
- “nerve”
- Bravery
- “sinew”
- Muscles & physical power
Tone
Hortatory (urgers reader to follow certain path) + forceful (didactic)
- Repetiton: “If”
- ‘If-‘ begs question ‘is it possible’ =
- Repetition forces reader to think whether or
not they can live up to circumstances/conditions described - Sets a challenge we feel we should meet
- Fact consequences (reward) of circumstances held back until end
- Symbol of having reached manhood
- = sense of drama & anticipation, reader wants follow this certain path
Structure #1
Iambic pentameter
- Closest written form to speech
- Pace of stability/familiarity
- Rooted in confidence
- 11 syllables & then 10 syllables (alternates) i.e. every odd line has additional syllable
- 1st line = obstacle (additional syllable)
- 2nd line = overcoming it (iambic pentameter)
- (Alternating rhyme scheme supports this)
Structure #2
Structured as one long sentence = every line flowing into next
- Creates perpetual ‘enjambment’
- Sense of pace, urgency & dynamism
- Makes poem feel important
- Didactic = Kipling trying to educate son & reader (aspire to become British gentleman)
- Implies spiritual and mental journey to manhood is long,
complicated + challenging
Name 5 possible comparisons
- “Prayer Before Birth”
- “Search for my Tongue”
- “Poem at Thirty Nine”
- “Piano”
- “Do not go gentle into that good night”
“Prayer Before Birth” Comparison
- Both about cruel world
- Kipling sees it as brave & admirable to face it
- MacNeice suggests it’s better not encounter life at all
“Search for my Tongue” Comparison
Both about what makes a person who they are
“Poem at Thirty Nine” Comparison
Both poems are about parent-child relationship = been very influential
“Piano” Comparison
Both about son’s relationship with parent
gentle into that good night” Comparison
Advice to son gives to father = reverse of Kipling’s poem