Hotel Room 12th Floor Flashcards
Quotes and analysis
This morning
Established setting and sense of time
Word Choice: suggests brightness, happiness and hopefullness
watched
Word Choice: suggests he is a passive speaker
helicopter skirting like a damaged insect
Simile: suggests something annoying and broken
Helicopter: symbol of wealth, MacCaig critices it and reduces it to something small and fragile
jumbo size dentist’s drill
Metaphor: compares ESB to something that causes fear, pain, suffering and is pointless
PanAm skyscraper
Heart of where NY connects to the rest of the world
Shows wealth and status
But
Word Choice: signifies clear turning point
Mood becomes more solemn
midnight has come in
Personification: implies midnight is a unwanted intruder
from foreign places
Word Choice: has connotations of something unfamiliar and strange
uncivilised darkness
Word Choice: connotations of chaos and conflict
Sometimes what can’t be seen is feared
shot at by a million lit windows
Connotations of violence and lots of people
Metaphor: introduces idea of good vs evil, trying to fight the dark, good has strength
ups and acrosses
Word Choice: shape of flats also religious image of good vs evil
But midnight
Word Choice: second turning point reinforces idea of midnight as a person
not
Enjambment: emphasises negativity and take over of darkness
easily defeated
idea that the struggle is futile as evil will win
lie in bed
can’t sleep
radio and television set
Word Choice: symbolism of technology, using it to block out reality but nothing is working
hear
his senses are being invaded
wildest of warwhoops
Alliteration: mimics the sound of war cries suggests violence and unrest like in native american films
Superlative: suggests the extremity/severity of violence
ululating
Onomatopoeia: howl, wails shows the noise made by sirens and victims of violence
glittering canyons and gulches
canyons and gulches are modern buildings
buildings are now an image of wealth but the city is still violence showing society isn’t evolving
police cars and ambulances racing
Word Choice: violence, danger, speed and chaos
Show the severe impact of the violence
broken bones
Synecdoche: reduces people to individual body parts suggests that the lower rung of society don’t have a place and no one cares about the impact on them
harsh screaming
pain, fear of those affected by the violence
coldwater flats
poorer society, left behind from technology, the rich get richer whilst the poor get poorer
blood glazed
Image of doughnuts, it is smeared and permanently stuck with a shiny glaze
sidewalks
transition from skyline to the ground
Stanza 2
extended metaphor comparing New York to the wild west
The frontier is never somewhere else
Enjambment: focuses on the negativity of never
Metaphor: evil is everywhere we go, the battle with darkness is everywhere, we cannot escape it is all around us
stockades
man-made barrier specifically designed to protect but it cannot defeat the evil within us
can keep the midnight out
final personification of midnight: midnight is a symbol of evil, MacCaig doesn’t think we can do anything to keep evil away