Blessing Flashcards
‘Blessing’
- Extended metaphor comparing water to a gift from God - religious connotations
- Shows how, despite the fact that this community is far from blessed, when there is scarcity, access to that thing seems like a ‘blessing’
Form
- Free verse
- Highlights how infrequently and irregularly this community receives water
Division between the 4 stanzas
- First two stanzas set the scene by describing the suffering caused by the scarcity
- Second, longer stanza with enjambment describes the excitment of the people when given access to this scarce resource
- The fourth stanza describes it as a blessing, and how it is only a temporary relief - the drout will come again
Enjambment and one-sentence nature of poem
- Mimetic of the flow of water
- Increased enjambent in second stanza creates a sense of excitement and chaos
- Shows how it is so valuable due to its scarcity, so it always at the forefront of people’s minds and the excitement it can cause when people are given access to it
Caesuras
- Contrast with the regularity created by the enjambment
- Disrupts the regularity of the flow of the poem to show how their supply of water is haphazard at best
‘The skin cracks’
- Metaphor for the earth, though polysemus as it could mean literal dry skin
- Harsh consonants in ‘cracks’
- Emphasises the harsh effects of the drout and the sun, and the breadth of these effects as it impacts both man and nature
‘like a pod’
- Similie
- Further shows the breadth of the impact of the drout as it affects man and nature
- Emphasises how violent and gruesome the effects of a lack of water can be on a person
‘There never is enough water’
- Anastrophe
- Foregrounds the word ‘never’ to heighten the harsh presentation of the drout and the desperation of the people
‘Imagine the drip of it’
- Imperative
- Instructs the reader who likely has never experienced severe drout to try and sympathise with the community and understand their suffering
‘small splash’
- Sibilance
- Mimetic of dehydration to show the severity of the drout
‘echo’
- End-focused word
- Shows the significance of simply one drop of water
‘in a tin mug’
‘Tin’ implies poverty
‘the voice of a kindly god’
- Metaphor
- Shows how scarce water is by comparing even the sound of a single drop to the ‘voice of a god’ to illustrate their gratefulness for even a little bit of water
- However, ‘kindly’ is ironic as the best this God could do is provide one single drop to this desperate community
‘Sometimes’
Shows how infrequently and unpredictably they receive water
‘municipal’
- Regularity of ‘municipal’ contrasts how infrequently they receive water
- It highlights the deep inequalities within humanity, accentuating the desperation of this community
‘silver crashes’
- Metaphor
- Highlights the value of water for this community, forcing privileged readers to reflect
‘the sudden rush’ and ‘the flow has found’
- Sibilance and fricative alliteration
- Mimetic of the flow of water
‘a roar of tongues’
- Metaphor and synecdoche
- Shows the chaos caused by people flocking to try and receive some water
- The synecdohce of ‘tongues’ shows how to the people their tongue is the most important aspect of them in this moment as it is what can consume water
‘congregation’
- Religious connotations, comparing the crowd of people to worshippers in a church
- Shows how water is so scarce they almost worship it
‘every man woman and child’ and ‘pots, brass, copper, aluminium, plastic buckets’
- Asyndetic lists
- Shows the chaos, desperation and even hysteria at this moment
‘and naked children’
- Pathos
- Makes us question why children should endure so much suffering to be excited by water
‘liquid sun’
- Metaphor
- ‘Sun’ is symbolic of the joy at this moment in time, but foreshadows the soon to come burning and drout once the flow of water ends
‘as the blessing sings’
Continues the extended metaphor
‘their highlights polished to perfection’ and ‘over their small bones’
- Pathos highlighting their fragility
- Shows their poverty and malnourishment, contrasted with their innocence and undeservedness