Between a Rock and a Hard Place Flashcards
‘Between a rock and a hard place’
- Idiom
- Forshadows the coming predicament he will find himself in
‘maybe eleven or twelve feet high’
- Casual tone
- Shows his confidence and expertise
‘refrigerator chockstone’
- Jargon
- Shows his confidence and expertise
‘ten feet downstream’ and ‘the claustrophobic feel of a short tunnel’
Foreshadowing for the events to come
‘at the lip of the drop off’
- Personification
- Makes the canyon seem more menacing, as if it is out to get him
‘it’s possible for me to stem my body across the slot’
- Stem, across and slot are all sibilant sounds
- It shows how deft and agile he is while he slithers and slides around the canyon
‘Controlling the counterpressure’
- Alliteration
- Emphasises his control and expertise
‘This technique is known as stemming or chimneying; you can imagine using it to climb up the inside of a chimney’
- Compound sentence and jargon
- ‘stemming or chimneying’ are present continuous verbs
- Shows his expertise and his sense of being in control, as well as using domestic imagery to make it relatable which is quite condescending
- It shows how confident he is which foreshadows the events to come
‘Just below the ledge where I’m standing is a chockstone the size of a large bus tire stuck fast in the channel between the walls, a few feet out from the lip’
- Complex sentence
- Shows his expertise in being able to survey his situation, but also highlights the precarious situation he is in, foreshadowing the events to come
‘If I can step onto it, then I’ll have a nine-foot height to descend’
- ‘If I can step onto it’ is a dependant clause
- It shows how he is planning things, further emphasising him being in control
- It also creates an element of uncertainty, foreshadowing the events to come
‘I press my back against the south wall and lock my left knee which pushes my foot tight against the north wall’
- Complex sentence
- Reassures us that he is still in control
‘teeters slighty’
The verb and adverb start to create tension, which is further foreshadowing
‘akin to climbing down from the roof of a house’
- Similie
- Allows the average person to relate, showing he is still confident and an expert as he is trying to make things more accessible to the average person
‘I feel the stone respond to my adjusting grip’
- Personification of the stone
- Builds tension and makes the readers uneasy
‘Instantly’
- Adverb which is also a volta
- Creates a shift in tone from confident and in control to fear and chaos