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Voices
Voices are made by writers to ‘speak’ to a reader
Purpose and process
Strategies and tactics to find and hone voices of characters
other people’s writing
gives a reference point for your own work
Engage
The writer needs to engage an audience or reader
Refine
Refine the language so the narrative or sequences have maximum impact
Draft
A version of the writing - there will be several drafts
edit
what to leave in and what to cut out
Drafting
to sharpen the focus of the writing
influence of film on writing
sharpens the focus of the story by cutting out extraneous information
show don’t tell
John was very angry with his child. John grabbed the child by his wrist and slapped the back of his leg or “Come here NOW!”
Forward movement
Moving a story on
when we speculate about the character - it advances the story
The character drives the story
character’s voices
Must be distinguishable between each other
consistency in tone
Each character will be recognisable from how they speak. The writer will immediately know how one character speaks and what they would say
Indirect responses
Why don’t we worry about the food shopping later?
He’s bound to be gluten free. carb free, sugar free, fun free isn’t he.
Sol Stein believes good dialogue needs to be oblique - to contain indirect responses.
Interruptions
He was such a lovely boy he -
- Did you want tea or coffee mum?
pauses
You should do this question in the exam…
… yes, definitely.
repetition
He made me laugh so much. He did… When he tipped the dinner on the tablecloth. You would have found it funny. He really made me laugh.
Hesitation
Er… well… I’m not sure if that’s actually correct… yes, well. You know better.
overlapping dialogue
CONSTRUCTED TO IMITATE THE REALITY OF PEOPLE TALKING ACROSS EACH OTHER
Anne Yes, /we’d love to come and see your holiday snaps
John I’m afraid we’re rather tied up that weekend
genre
drama, documentary, play, docu-drama
sub-genre
romance, comedy, black comedy, horror, fantasy
main aim of speech
to give an insight into a character and action
voices
are representations of how people really talk
dialogue creates
an illusion of reality. to make you feel you are eavesdropping on a real conversation