Visiting Hour Flashcards
Hospital smell
word choice
recognisable place for all evocative smell
combs my nostrils
metaphor
emphasises the strength of the smell it is overpowering and unpleasant
bobbing
word choice
emphasises the joviality of the nurses movement which contrasts the hospitals setting
green and yellow
word choice
the colours are associated with illness and sickness
corpse
word choice
suggests how death confronts him in the hospital
vanishes
word choice
suggests the sudden unpredictability of death
heavenward
word choice
sense of hope that the soul may go to heaven after death
I will not feel, I will not feel
repetition
emphasises how he wishes to ignore his emotions and stay numb to his emotions of grief and pain for his friend
I have to
word choice
and separation onto new line emphasises how he realises that at some point he must allow himself to feel grief
lightly, swiftly
word choice
sense of movement, they are accomplished in their duties
connotations of being care free which contrasts hospital
here and up and down and there
word choice
omnipresence in hospital that the nurses are always busy which contrasts patients
miraculously
word choice
suggests his admiration for the nurses
carrying their burden
metaphor
suggests his admiration for the nurses as they look after very unwell people and are constantly working in the face of death
so much pain, so many deaths
repetition
emphasises how suffering is their daily life
still clear after so many farewells
word choice
they contrast his emotional instability
he is in awe of them despite the terrible suffering they will have seen they are still capable of going on
Ward 7
minor sentence
provides break in the poem reflecting his sudden arrival
white cave of forgetfulness
metaphor
expresses the isolation she exists in due to her illness. She has no sensory awareness
withered
word choice
association with death and the extremes of illness. close to death
trembles on it’s stalk
metaphor
suggests how close she is to death, sense of fragility she is well passed her vitality
too heavy to raise
word choice
suggests how exhausting her illness is
wasted of colour
word choice
connotations of lack of life and close to death
glass fang is fixed
personification
IV has vampiric connotations emphasising the horror of her illness, as even though she has been given a lot of medicine it isn’t working
distance shrinks until distance between pain
metaphor
emphasises the pain and division illness has causes it prevents communication
neither she nor I can cross
word choice
emphasises both of their isolation hers in pain and his in grief