visiting hour Flashcards
“combs”
personification indicates the invasive and harsh smell. It’s strong and stings the persona’s nostrils, making it clear how unpleasant this experience is for him.
“trundled”
word choice indicates indignity with which hospitals treat death. lifeless and graceless movement demonstrate negative attitude.
I will not feel, I will not
feel, until
I have to.
“I have to”: simple sentence show they knows that the feelings that follow are inevitable, just as death is.
carrying their burden of so much pain, so many deaths, their eyes still clear after so many farewells.
repetition so- emphasises amount of pain
white cave of forgetfulness.
metaphor – implies the white curtains around her bed act as a barrier and she is isolated from others. white- positive blissully unaware of pain of those around her
glass fang
metaphor suggests that the medical drip is like a vampire, adding to the sense of fear the persona for hospital visit.
“black figure”
word choice - her vision is clouded by her illness, she cannot clearly see the persona who has visited her. connotations death, covered in a black cloak, waits for her and she may be relieved its coming
books that will not be read
and fruitless fruits.
enjambment – isolation that both persona and patient feel. oxymoron captures the persona’s despair, as the lady’s prolonged illness- and he is powerless. The fruits he brings useless, therefore fruitless.