Valentine (Carol Ann Duffy) Flashcards
CONTEXT (AO3)
written by Carol Ann Duffy
- identifies as a lesbian
purpose
- to condemn the consumerist, commercialised, modern day view of Valentine’s day
- to condemn the traditional preconceptions of love and relationships
- to explicitly reject the shallow, glossy representations of love and takes care to reveal the shortcomings of societal expectations for romantic relationships
written in 1990s
- a time when anti-LGBT+ sentiment was on the rise
STRUCTURE
- free verse (no rhythm or rhyme)
- irregular stanzas
the poem is written in free verse using irregular stanzas to support its content and purpose, which is to reject traditional restrictive conventions such as marriage and other notions of love and to warn lovers that being overly possessive can have undesirable consequences.
FORM
written in the form of a free-verse poem.
‘Not a red rose or a satin heart.’
‘Not… .’ - SHORT SENTENCE - creates an abrupt and declarative tone - immediately rejects convention.
‘red rose’ - ALLITERATION - allows Duffy to condemn the traditional conventions of love by creating a scornful tone.
‘I give you an onion’
‘onion’ - NOUN - asserting that the onion symbolises a positive aspect of love since it represents refreshing honesty and optimism.
‘It is a moon wrapped in brown paper.’
‘moon’ - METAPHOR - the moon controls emotions and therefore conveys the volatile nature of feelings within relationships
‘moon’ - METAPHOR - suggests light/innocence - could convey ides of hope
‘wrapped in brown paper.’ - represents the toughness and inaccessibility that people develop regarding love.
‘Here.’
‘Take it.’
‘Here.’ + ‘Take it.’ - SHORT SENTENCES - creates a commanding and desperate tone.
‘I am trying to be truthful.’
‘trying’ + ‘to’ + ‘truthful’ - ALLITERATION - conveys the writers struggle (to keep the love alive)
this line acts as a pivotal transition
- honesty is crucial within a relationship
‘Not a cute card or a kissogram.’
‘cute card’ + ‘kissogram’ - ALLITERATIVE hard ‘Cs’ and ‘Ks’ - conveys contempt
‘It’s fierce kiss will stay on your lips,
possessive and faithful
as we are
for as long as we are’
‘possessive and faithful’ - ADJECTIVES - connotes that love is the same
‘as we are’ - REPETITION - shows the excessive and overly abundant nature of love
‘It’s platinum loops shrink to a wedding ring’
‘shrink’ - VERB - shows how love has the potential to diminish
‘shrink’ - VERB - commitment/love is confining and restrictive
the rings of the onion symbolise eternity and are infinite.
‘It’s scent will cling to your fingers,
cling to your knife.’
‘cling’ - REPETITION - possessive
‘knife’ - NOUN - connotes ideas of violence and pain
‘fingers’ - ASSONANT VOWELS - rhythmic and memorable