Valentine Flashcards
Valentine (title)
Title suggests this this poem will deal with fairly conventional notions of love with positive connotations
Not
The title is juxtaposed with the first line with the negative not clearly shutting down al positive associations with this title
I give you an onion
Repetition of this line highlights the importance of this gift being accepted by the lover. Sounds humorous compared to line 1.
Moon
Associated with brightness, happiness and light. Also it is said to influence moods and emotions specially in women
Wrapped
Highlights that this onion is a special gift with care put into it
Brown paper
Refers to the texture and colour of the outer layer reminding us that gifts donβt need to be concealed with expensive wrapping
Promises light
Conveys optimism and hopefulness of lovers
Like the careful undressing of love
Like love, the unwrapping of the onion gives way to a more tender inside. Care must be taken as to not damage the special insides as it is precious. Different layers when discovering new people in a relationship.
Here.
Powerfully stopped short line emphasises forceful presentation of gift
It will blind you with tears like a lover
Simile - relationships may occasionally cause pain and make you cry just as getting to close to an onion causes a stream of tears
It will make your reflection a wobbling photo of grief
Vulnerability and danger people expose themselves to in a relationship when they fully show theirselves and it reminds us of loves destructive potential
I am trying to be truthful
Attempting to justify all that has been said so far and continues to stress her desire for honesty with the relationship. Alliteration strengthens feeling that love should be honest. Change in tone - this is turning point
Not (a cute card or a kissogram)
Single line juxtaposes with the line before. As if cute cards and kissograms are not truthful and exposes the opening more rejecting line
Kissogram.
Full stop signifies a pause as the speaker awaits their gift to be received
I give you an onion
Repetition of line 2 reminds the reader of the gift
Itβs fierce kiss will stay on your lips
Sibilance reinforces kissing sounds creating onomatopoeic effect. Harsh
Possessive and faithful
Attempting to articulate not only the romantic, positive aspects of love but itβs more negative, darker associations. Possessive has connotations of controlling and clingy
For as long as we are
Cynical tone - suggest that love is temporary but the scent is overwhelming, lasting longer. Maybe suggests that lovers should only stay together for as long as they are passionate.
Take it
Another powerful command. Mor edirect this time reinforced by full stop. Builds to climax
Lethal
Powerful. Implies love can be lethal and dangerous causing harm to both. Reinforces the notion of imminent death
Itβs scent will cling to your fingers cling to your knife
Connotations of being annoying, possessive and irritating. Suggests a lack of space and that is annoying. Powerful love is hard to forget and it may lead you to difficult situations where the final outcome may be brutal and violent