Truby Comedy Flashcards
Explain: Creating a comedy that develops
(Moral weakness) Since laughter happens in a moment, most comic ideas for stories remain small, stretching one to three scenes. The best comic ideas explore a moral weakness of the hero.
What are the 5 unique problems of comedy ?
- Creating a comedy that develops (moral weakness)
- Getting the audience to care about the characters (care then drop)
- Leading with a single hero
- Keeping the story momentum strong (goal)
- Retaining the basic comic opposition (contrast)
Explain: Getting the audience to care about the characters
Comedy, by making fun, tends to distance the audience from the characters and put the audience in a superior position. The best comedies work to make the audience care about the characters up front before making fun.
Explain: Leading with a single hero
Comedies usually have more characters than serious writing and they tend to emphasize the society. This can lead to a slow or circular story unless you choose one character within the group to drive the action.
Explain: Keeping the story momentum strong
Strong Goal- Comedies tend to stop the story to set up and pay off a gag or a joke. Without a strong goal by the hero, the comedy will often bog down and even good jokes are not funny.
Explain: Retaining the basic comic opposition
Opposition Contrast- The basic comic opposition that fuels the story often disappears once the audience has seen the contrast for a few scenes. The trick is to choose an opposition that cannot disappear.
What are the 10 keys to great comedy?
- premise is not a single line gag.
- Create a comic hero with a gap
- steps of the classic structure.
- hero has specific and active goal.
- distinct 4-point opposition.
- comic nightmare that is the worst thing imaginable
- Know precisely who is going to be dropped
- Reduce the character to animal, child or machine.
- Make the key word in the gag the last word.
- Make sure your comedy expresses your personal vision of how the world works and what is a valuable way to live.
Explain the negative comic view of life (6)
- (clueless) believes that individuals are part of a larger social whole and are mostly unaware of how everyone is affecting them
- (phony) everyone is a collection of roles (need); we have a true self and a true value but also a public image that we project to get power and popularity with others
- (silly desire) what people strive for (desire) is relatively silly and not nearly as valuable as they think at the time
- (incompetent) people are often incompetent in action (drive)
- ( extreme incompetence ) action often does not lead to success and occasionally leads to the opposite of what the person intended
- (repeat mistakes) people only think they learn but actually remain the same and repeat the same mistakes throughout their lives (self-revelation)
Explain the positive comic view of life (4)
- (people good) there is a common humanity under the surface of roles and pretension that makes people good and valuable
- (laugh) there is no problem that can’t be solved, if only by laughing at it
- (questioning is good) questioning and attacking the system is ultimately creative and valuable; in other words, the value of the iconoclast or devil
- (we will survive) the group will endure and life will go on, no matter how much we do to screw it up
Name the three basic comedy forms
Animal
Child
Machine
What is animal comedy?
Showing people doing or discussing basic bodily functions
For example, any dirty joke or bathroom humor
Characters/Actors: Bluto (John Belushi), Blues Brothers
Stories: Animal House, Porky’s, Caddyshack, Blues Brothers
What is child comedy
Someone acting as a child; more generally, someone reacting with more emotion than the situation would normally require
For example, panic, crying, screaming, fighting
Characters/Actors: Lucy, Jerry Lewis, Pee Wee Herman
Stories: I Love Lucy, The Nutty Professor
What is machine comedy
Someone acting like a thing or a machine; more generally, reacting with less emotion than the situation requires
For example, deadpan, understatement, sarcasm
Characters/Actors: Buster Keaton, Bill Murray, Bob Newhart, Eddie Murphy
Stories: Ghostbusters, Meatballs, The Blues Brothers
First rule of comedy: If the audience cannot immediately identify someone who is being dropped, the comedy will be less or will not exist at all.
Name the 9 most common comedy characters.
Clown/klutz Everyman Know-it-all Show business type Princess Aristocrat Gross out king Trickster Traveling angel
Explain the comic gap
The drop from high to low of a character which should produce a laugh.
Explain the high in the comic gap
Pretense or puffery in a character that reflects his need
Explain the low in the comic gap
Shows the reality of the character when the pretense is exposed
Clown/Klutz desire
Desire- romance or success
Clutz clown - high
High - illusion of being romantic or successful
Clutz clown low
Low-actually a nerd, incompetent , unattractive or bumbling
Clutz clown psych need
Psych need- learn self confidence and overcome loneliness
Clutz clown moral need
Moral need- rarely present, victim
Clutz clown examples
Examples- ghostbusters Rick moranis, Annie hall, Arthur
Everyman/everywoman desire
Desire- climb social ladder, American dream
Know it all desire
Desire- hero wants to impress others
Show business type desire
Desire - to fool people
Princess -desire
Desire - to be taken cared of , pampered, center of attention
Aristocrat desire
Desire. Wants to impose a rich, cultivated and higher class image
Gross out king desire
Desire. Tear down thin veneer of upper class propriety
Trickster desire
Desire. To defeat authority to get what he wants
Traveling angel desire
Desire. Being fun altruistically to middle class world of stress routine and self doubt
What is the biggest weakness in most comedies?
Lack of theme