the furthest distances ive travelled Flashcards
Half rhyme, imperfect
- Comical effect
- Failure - desperate struggling to make the poem rhyme
“sherpa pass”, “krakow” “zagreb” “siberian white”
speaker uses a range of unfamiliar sounding place names
“in restlessness, in anony / mity”
split word over line
- constantly on the move - travelling constantly
- moving around constantly means that no one in these places knows you
- escaping from her own identity
“some kind of destiny”
- her dreams of travelling are just dreams and not reality
“catching a greyhound from madison to milwaukee /
than to be doing some overdue laundry”
- juxtaposition between reality and fantasy
- she had a mundane and ordinary life - comical juxtaposition to her dreams
“However, when, during routine evictions”
Emotional turning point of the poem
“alien pants, cinema stubs, the throwaway comment…”
listing objects from previous relationships
- despite not following her dreams and travelling, she has still lived a fulfilling life - she hasnt missed out
“I know these are my souvenirs”
Metaphor
- travel associated with previous relationships
“And what survives of holidaying briefly in their lives”
speaker has the realisation that they value the emotional journey rather than the physical journey
travel as a metaphor
for emotional jounreys
rhyme throughout the poem
- the rhyme in the first half of the poem is loose and half rhyme
- the rhyme in the second half is more constructed and perfect as the speaker recognises her true feeligns