Story

Question 1

Character details (9)

Answer 1

• bloodshot eyes
• Dark circles
• Unkempt hair
• Heaviness
• Numbness
• Apathetic
• pale skin
• slack jawline
• slumped posture

Question 2

What is oaragraph 1 about

Answer 2

• description of weather, atmosphere and mood zoom in on rain

Question 3

What is paragraph 2 about

Answer 3

Description of man , his characteristics and how he walks

Question 4

What is paragraph 3 about

Answer 4

Narrative and catallytic paragraph where nan gets triggered

Question 5

What is paragraph 4 about

Answer 5

Man gets flashback to daughters death

Question 6

What is paragraph 5 about

Answer 6

Ending when nan takes revenge

Question 7

What is paragraph 3.5 about

Answer 7

One line paragraph signifying a flashback

Question 8

Description of weather 1

Answer 8

• The rain soaked streets reflected the dim glow of streetlights

Question 9

Description of tge nan - sentences - 2-4

Answer 9

• forceful wind mirroring the weight of his thoughts
• His cold gaze fixed on the ground
• Despite the dreary scene the man felt comfort in the rain it was as if nature was weeping alongside him ; sharing his pain
• His lips curved slightly in what almost resembled a smile

Question 10

Part of p2 descrbing how he likes the rain

Answer 10

• Despite the dreary scene the man felt comfort in the rain. it was as if nature was weeping alongside him sharing his pain
• His lips curved slightly in what almost resembled a smile

Question 11

Paragraph 3 contents

Answer 11

• Continues walking aimlessly
• He didn’t notice it at first.
• Maybe if things had stayed that way it would have been different.
• But nevertheless he did see it snd the realisation hit him like a brick.
• It was a black sedan. The black sedan ( and next stood a demon) - the same one that stole his joy with its cold clutching metal hands all those years ago

Question 12

Paragraph 3.5

Answer 12

and just like that….he was there again/ he was taken back

Question 13

Description of the mans eyes

Answer 13

His eyes were dark and distant like starring into an empty void that not even the sun could light up

Question 14

Paragraph 4 contents

Answer 14

it was the first day of spring 2015 and his daughter April bounced around gleefully. Her energy was infectious. When you saw her you couldnt help but smile. It was a day like any other - just picked up from dance practice and decided to get ice cream - got a call from work and gave her money to pay - turned his head for one second maybe two but that was enough. When the car crashed into his daughter there was nothing left to do.

Question 15

Description of his daughter

Answer 15

• glimmer in her eye
• her energy was infectious
• if ge was now the embodiment of darkness then she was tge embodiment if light

Question 16

Paragraph 5 contents

Answer 16

• “Nooooo” the man wailed in agony but it was too late. She was dead and the man guilty of it was standing right in front of him.
• Rage engulfed every aspect of his being oozing out his pores; for a moment it seemed like he was about to snap but then ….. a realisation hit him. this wasnt a curse or a cruel turn of fate. This was serendipity.this was his chance for revenge.

Question 17

Description of the mans rage and tgen his realisation

Answer 17

Rage engulfed every aspect of his being oozing out his pores; for a moment it seemed like he was about to snap but then ….. a realisation hit him. this wasnt a curse or a cruel turn of fate. This was serendipity.this was his chance for revenge.