Spontaneous Vs Srcipted Speech Draft Flashcards
Evidence: ‘Fascinating’ and ‘Devastating’
Explain: Jobs uses adjectives & emotive language to allow his message to be more meaningful (then say his message)
Furthermore: Both fascinating & devastating are exact opposites but Jobs’ Professional tone presents as both equal and must be viewed as the same.
Evidence: “Stay Hungry, Stay Foolish”
Explain: Tone quite emphatic, speaks confidently making his message more believable as he is sure of himself.(write his message).
Furthermore: Ends speech with inclusive language showing success can be achieved by everyone. Short sentences imply that success is simple, all you need to do is work.
Evidence: “I had the surgery and I’m fine now”
Develop Evidence: “Yet death is the destination we all share.”
Explain: Earnest & Sincerity in his tone allowing him to be relatable as not even he can avoid struggles in life. Talk about message that he had to keep fighting for his life.
Furthermore: Inclusive pronoun “we” used to not sound superior & that we can all overcome any challenge & keep fighting.
Evidence: ‘devastating’ and ‘it freed me’
Develop evidence: ‘I still loved what I did’
Explain: uses adjectives ‘devastating’ & emotive language to show you have to deal with the unexpected & to learn to overcome. Emphasis placed on ‘Devastating’ with dramatic pause.
Furthermore: Describes his views of life as showing failure can be turned into success.
Evidence: “I feel like a fraud”
Develop: “my first name’s Chris”
Explain: uses dramatic pauses & used specific language choices to shock the crowd as well as blunt admittance showing honesty Just like Jobs allowing both men to be admired by their audiences.
Furthermore: sincere tone & calm pace showing not superior makes emotionally bonding with his audience by being honest & open just like Steve allowing his message to be more impactful.
Evidence: “I don’t have a career without you guys.”
Develop evidence: “opportunity looks a lot like hard work”
Explain: directly addresses audience with flattery language preparing them for his message which will have more impact Just like Jobs, allowing themselves to seem humble & not superior meaning their message is more believable to the audience.
Furthermore: similarities between Jobs & Kutcher both don’t sugarcoating are open & honest. Both are trying to inspire.
Evidence: “Don’t live one, build one”
Explain: imperative language used to inspire audience to take control of their lives, Just like Jobs. Allowing the audience to open up to other possibilities.
Furthermore: in Ashtons final lines he talks calmly with a calm tone & again imperative language used to encourage them to adopt his love of life similar to Jobs.
Evidence: “every job I had was a stepping stone to my next job”
Explain: uses metaphors to make messages more simplistic for audiences as he aims to motivate them(motivational message)
Furthermore: Ashton places great stress and emphasis on the word ‘Job’ to show that you must work for success. Serious tone & speaks confidently making his message more believable, sharing similarities with Steve.
