SAT Writing and Language Questions - Multiple Choice Flashcards

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Not only are financial advising jobs scarce in Brattleboro, but my personal requirements have also weeded out the opportunities that there are.

A. NO CHANGE

B. Financial advising jobs are crazy scarce in Brattleboro, but what yours truly wanted has also made it like totally impossible to get a job!

C. Financial advising positions are a meager lot in Brattleboro, and my exclusive preconditions have also expelled manifold situations obtainable in the township.

D. There are no jobs like the ones I want and I made it even harder on myself cause of what I like.

A

The correct answer is A. The sentence is fine as written, fitting into the personal yet still professional tone the passage has already established. Choice B is too informal, using idiomatic phrases such as “crazy scarce,” “yours truly,” and “like totally impossible” that are out of place in this particular passage. Choice C is too formal, lacking the personal touch of the rest of the passage. Choice D violates the passage’s established style with a sentence that lacks the clarity and specific details of the rest of the passage.

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A few banks were hiring financial advisors, such positions are generally more focused on sales than the kind of hands on, face-to-face, life-impacting advising I’d prefer to do.

A. NO CHANGE

B. A few banks were hiring financial advisors positions are generally more focused on sales than the kind of hands on, face-to-face, life-impacting advising I’d prefer to do.

C. A few banks were hiring financial advisors: such positions are generally more focused on sales than the kind of hands on, face-to-face, life-impacting advising I’d prefer to do.

D. A few banks were hiring financial advisors, but such positions are generally more focused on sales than the kind of hands on, face-to-face, life-impacting advising I’d prefer to do.

A

The correct answer is D. As the sentence originally stands, there is a comma splice because there is no conjunction to separate its two clauses. Choice D corrects that error with the conjunction but, which also means that choice A can be eliminated. Choice B makes the mistake of deleting a necessary word (such) when the addition of a word (but) is needed here. Choice C makes an effort to correct the error with a different form of punctuation, but only a semicolon could accomplish that correction, and this answer choice uses a colon instead.

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Which choice most effectively combines the sentences at the underlined portion?

The job outlook was grim. My outlook about my new life in Brattleboro also began to darken a bit.

A. The job outlook was grim my outlook

B. The job outlook was grim, and my outlook

C. The job outlook as grim, my outlook

D. With the job outlook so grim, my outlook

A

The correct answer is D. Choice D joins a choppy pair of sentences with the correct punctuation (a comma) and rewrites the first sentence to better set up the one that follows. Choice A fails to connect the two sentences with any punctuation or rewrite the first sentence for the sake of fluidness. By only using a comma and the conjunction and, choice B remains a choppy read. It is not grammatically incorrect, but choice B is not as strong of an edit as choice D is. Choice C creates a comma splice by failing to use a conjunction to join the two sentences.

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Had I made a fast decision to move to a place with a dearth of appealing job opportunities?

A. NO CHANGE

B. hasty

C. rapid

D. witty

A

The correct answer is B. As it is originally written, the sentence makes sense, but fast is not a precise enough word to convey not only the speed, but also the lack of thought behind the author’s decision, so choice A is incorrect. Choice B does a much better job of conveying both the speed and the lack of thought behind the decision. Like choice A, choice C is too focused on speed alone, so it is not the best answer. Choice D conveys the opposite of the author’s intention, making it seem as though the decision was smart rather than lacking consideration.

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However, the outlook began to get as bright as the blazing sun in the sky when it dawned on me to broaden my horizons beyond brick-and-mortar financial institutions to the virtual world.

A. NO CHANGE

B. However, the outlook began to get as bright as the blazing sun

C. However, the outlook began to brighten

D. However, the outlook began to get nice

A

The correct answer is C. The original sentence is much too wordy, so choice A is not the best answer. Choice B is an improvement, but the phrase “bright as the blazing sun” is still too wordy for a sentence that is already pretty long. Choice C is a much more concise expression of the author’s ideas, and it is the best answer. Choice D goes too far in correcting the sentence’s wordiness with the overly simple and not very descriptive phrase “get nice.”

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Because my family is no longer crammed in a tiny Manhattan apartment, there was room in my new home to convert a spare bedroom into a home office, which has become my favorite space in the house.

A. NO CHANGE

B. there was room in my new home to convert a spare bedroom into a home office which has become my favorite space in the house.

C. there was room in my new home to convert a spare bedroom into a home office my favorite space in the house.

D. there was room in my new home to convert a spare bedroom into a home office, my favorite space in the house.

A

The correct answer is A. The original sentence uses a comma to separate the non-restrictive clause “which has become my favorite space in the house” from the rest of the sentence. Choice B makes the mistake of deleting that necessary comma. Choice C deletes both the comma and the words “which has become,” which transforms the sentence into a run on. Choice D retains the comma but loses the words “which has become,” and that creates a comma splice.

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It has taken some work acclimating to working from home, and I’d be lying if I said that there will be an instant flood of work, but after some dedication, I managed to find an excellent website that needed hungry new financial advisers to offer sound financial advice to lower-income clients.

A. NO CHANGE

B. I’d be lying if I said that there was an instant flood of work

C. I’d be lying if I said that there is an instant flood of work

D. I’d be lying if I said that there had been an instant flood of work

A

The correct answer is B. The original sentence lacks parallel structure since most of it takes place in the past, but the phrase “will be” indicates the future. Choice B corrects this error by changing that future-tense phrase to the past tense “was.” Choice C changes the phrase to the present tense, which also violates the sentence’s past-tense structure. Choice D uses the past perfect progressive tense, which is not the tense in which the rest of the sentence is written.

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My ultimate goal is to open my own practice, but I’ll need a lot more practical work experience first

A. NO CHANGE

B. good

C. legal

D. correct

A

The correct answer is A. In this sentence, the author is saying that he needs more hands-on work experience before opening his own practice, and practical is a good word to use to express that idea. Therefore, the sentence is correct as is, and choice A is the best answer. Good makes sense in this context, but it lacks the precision of practical, which expresses the hands-on nature of the work much better than good does. Choice C is an odd choice, suggesting that there are illegal work options, and there is no indication of such a thing in the passage. Like choice B, choice D is a vague word choice that lacks the precision of the best answer: choice A.

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Even after centuries of paleontological study, so much about dinosaurs remain a mystery to modern science.

A. NO CHANGE

B. so much about dinosaurs remains a mystery to modern science

C. so much about dinosaurs will remain a mystery to modern science

D. so much about dinosaurs remaining a mystery to modern science

A

The correct answer is B. The verb remain must agree with the singular subject much, and it fails to do so in the original sentence, which seems to mistake the plural dinosaurs for the subject. Choice B corrects this error by changing remain to remains. Choices C and D fail to correct that error, changing the tense of the verb remain in ways that do not agree with a sentence written in the present tense.

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In one of the most widely reported recent controversies regarding our ancient friends, problems have surfaced regarding whether or not some of the most well-known dinosaurs were covered in bird-like feathers rather than lizard-like scales, as they’ve been depicted sporting since the dawn of paleontology.

A. NO CHANGE

B. a fight has

C. talk has

D. debate has

A

The correct answer is D. The passage is mainly focused on two contrasting ideas regarding the nature of certain dinosaurs in the scientific community: some scientists believe that Dracorex, Stygimoloch, and Pachycephalosaurus are three completely distinct dinosaurs, and others believe they are all different phases of the same dinosaur. Such two contrasting concepts suggest a debate in the dinosaur community, so choice D is the best answer. Choice A implies that the debate has led to problems, which is not really supported by information in the passage. Choice B implies some sort of angry or even physical disagreement, so fight is too strong a word to use to describe a contrast of ideas in the scientific community. Choice C is too vague: talk fails to show that there are two, contrasting sides in the discussion.

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At the center of this quandary is Pachycephalosaurus a fifteen-foot long, two-legged herbivore distinguished by its beak-like mouth and unusually smooth crown surrounded by a thin ring of nasty-looking spikes.

A. NO CHANGE

B. At the center of this quandary is Pachycephalosaurus, a fifteen-foot long, two-legged herbivore

C. At the center of this quandary is, Pachycephalosaurus, a fifteen-foot long, two-legged herbivore

D. At the center of this quandary is Pachycephalosaurus; a fifteen-foot long, two-legged herbivore

A

The correct answer is B. As originally written, the sentence lacks a comma before the appositive “a fifteen-foot long,” so choice A is incorrect. Choice B corrects this error by introducing a comma and placing it before the appositive correctly. Choice C adds a comma before the appositive, but it also adds an extra, unnecessary comma before the subject “Pachycephalosaurus.” Choice D uses the wrong punctuation before the appositive; a comma is needed, not a semicolon.

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However, it also involves two other dinosaurs—Dracorex and Stygimoloch—which may not be distinct species at all.

A. NO CHANGE

B. clear

C. definite

D. diverse

A

The correct answer is A. The point of this sentence is that Dracorex and Stygimoloch may not be different, or distinct, species from Pachycephalosaurus, so the sentence is perfectly fine as originally written. Choices B and C substitute words that could be synonyms for distinct in a different context, but not this particular one; clear and definite do not mean different. Choice D makes a similar error; diverse can mean different, but it suggests a great variety of forms when the author uses distinct simply to show that three particular dinosaurs may not actually be different animals.

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A new theory posits that Dracorex and Stygimoloch are in fact Pachycephalosaurus at early stages in it’s life.

A. NO CHANGE

B. it

C. its

D. its’

A

The correct answer is C. The underlined word needs to be the possessive form of it, but it’s is a contraction of “it is.” Therefore, choice A can be eliminated. Choice C corrects that error with the proper possessive form of it: its. Choice B fails to show possession at all. Choice D is not correct under any circumstances; there is no form of it that places an apostrophe after the letter s.

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Both share certain obvious similarities with Pachycephalosaurus, the beaked mouth, the prominent head spikes, the two-legged gait, and tiny arms.

A. NO CHANGE

B. Pachycephalosaurus: the beaked mouth,

C. Pachycephalosaurus; the beaked mouth,

D. Pachycephalosaurus the beaked mouth,

A

The correct answer is B. The original sentence uses a comma to separate the list of similarities between Dracorex, Stygimoloch, and Pachycephalosaurus, but that is not the correct form of punctuation for that function. Therefore, choice A is incorrect. A list should be introduced with a colon, which means choice B is the correct answer. A semicolon is used to separate two complete clauses, so choice C is incorrect. Choice D fails to use any punctuation at all.

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Both creatures also have distinctive spike configurations on its cheeks, while Pachycephalosaurus’s cheeks are almost as smooth as the top of its head.

A. NO CHANGE

B. Both creatures also have distinctive spike configurations on their cheeks

C. The creature also has distinctive spike configurations on its cheeks

D. Both creatures also have distinctive spike configurations on they’re cheeks

A

The correct answer is B. As originally written, the singular pronoun its fails to agree with the plural antecedent creatures, so choice A is incorrect. Choice B corrects this error with the plural pronoun their. Choice C is grammatically correct, but it changes the meaning of a sentence that should discuss two creatures, not one. Choice D confuses they’re, a contraction of they and are, for its homophone, the plural possessive pronoun their.

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However, recent research suggests that the Dracorex and Stygimoloch are actually Pachycephalosaurus in earlier life stages—Pachycephalosaurus in adolescence, if you will.

A. NO CHANGE

B. Pachycephalosaurus in earlier life stages; Pachycephalosaurus in adolescence

C. Pachycephalosaurus in earlier life stages: Pachycephalosaurus in adolescence

D. Pachycephalosaurus in earlier life stages, Pachycephalosaurus in adolescence

A

The correct answer is A. The sentence uses an em-dash to separate the main clause from an additional detail constructed as a phrase, so choice A is correct. A semicolon separates two or more complete clauses; it does not separate a clause from a phrase, so choice B is incorrect. A colon is used to introduce a list or a word being defined in the rest of the sentence, so choice C is incorrect. Choice D creates a comma splice, which is not correct under any circumstances.

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You and I both know that the Brontosaurus, once one of the most popular dinosaurs, was not an individual dinosaur at all.

A. NO CHANGE

B. You know that the Brontosaurus, once one of the most popular dinosaurs, was not an individual dinosaur at all

C. It is fairly well known that the Brontosaurus, once one of the most popular dinosaurs, was not an individual dinosaur at all

D. We all know that the Brontosaurus, once one of the most popular dinosaurs, was not an individual dinosaur at all

A

The correct answer is C. Most of the passage is written in the third-person point of view. However, the sentence as originally written violates that style by suddenly switching to the first-person point of view for no reason, so choice A is incorrect. Choice D makes that same error. Choice C maintains the style of the rest of the passage by rephrasing the sentence in the third-person point of view. Choice B uses the second-person point of view, so it fails to maintain the third-person perspective of the passage.

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Critics once derided television. Simple-minded, lowest-common-denominator entertainment; “a vast wasteland” in the famous words of former FCC chairman Newton N. Minow.

A. NO CHANGE

B. Critics once derided television as simple-minded, lowest-common-denominator entertainment; “a vast wasteland,” in the famous words of former FCC chairman Newton N. Minow.

C. Critics once derided television; simple-minded, lowest-common-denominator entertainment; “a vast wasteland” in the famous words of former FCC chairman Newton N. Minow.

D. Critics once derided simple-minded, lowest-common-denominator entertainment; “a vast wasteland” in the famous words of former FCC chairman Newton N. Minow.

A

The correct answer is B. The second sentence of the passage is a fragment, so choice A is incorrect. Choice B corrects this error by joining the first two sentences in a logical and grammatically correct way. Choice C also joins them, but a semicolon is not the correct form of punctuation to join a complete clause (the first sentence) and a fragment (the second sentence). Choice D is grammatically correct, but it changes the original sentence’s meaning by deleting the word television, making it seem as though entertainment in general is being discussed when a specific entertainment, television, is actually being discussed.

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Meanwhile, the small screen has emerged as a haven for intelligent drama, as cable channels such as HBO, A&E, and FX will realize television’s ability to tell powerful, long-form stories that would be impossible to tell in a two or even three-hour movie.

A. NO CHANGE

B. Meanwhile, the small screen has emerged as a haven for intelligent drama, as cable channels such as HBO, A&E, and FX will be realizing television’s ability to tell powerful, long-form stories

C. Meanwhile, the small screen has emerged as a haven for intelligent drama, as cable channels such as HBO, A&E, and FX have realized television’s ability to tell powerful, long-form stories

D. Meanwhile, the small screen has emerged as a haven for intelligent drama, as cable channels such as HBO, A&E, and FX realize television’s ability to tell powerful, long-form stories

A

The correct answer is C. As originally written, the sentence suffers from a lack of agreement between verb tenses. “has emerged” is in the present perfect tense, but “will realize” is in the simple future tense. Therefore, choice A is wrong. Choice C corrects this error by changing “will realize” to the present perfect progressive tense: “have realized.” Choice B mistakenly uses a different form of the future continuous tense: “will be realizing.” Choice D mistakenly uses the simple present tense: “realize.”

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While those archaic low entertainments are still easy to find on TV in the form of reality shows, soap operas, and asinine sitcoms and talk shows, the high quality of so many twenty-first century series has caused critics to begin viewing this era as a new golden age for television while film threatens to plunge into banality and irrelevancy.

A. NO CHANGE

B. While those old-fashioned low entertainments are still easy to find on TV in the form of reality shows, soap, operas, and mindless sitcoms and talk shows, the high quality

C. While those old-fashioned low entertainments are still easy to find on TV in the form of reality shows, soap operas, and mindless sitcoms, and talk shows, the high quality

D. While those old-fashioned low entertainments are still easy to find on TV in the form of reality shows, soap operas, and mindless sitcoms and talk shows the high quality

A

The correct answer is A. Commas in a list should be used after each item before the conjunction, and the original sentence does this correctly, while also using a comma to separate the introductory clause (“While those old-fashioned low entertainments are still easy to find on TV in the form of reality shows, soap operas, and mindless sitcoms and talk shows,”) from the rest of the sentence, so choice A is correct. This is a list of types of television shows, and a “soap opera” is a single type of television show that should not have a comma between the two words in its name, so choice B is incorrect. Choice C introduces an unnecessary and incorrect comma after “sitcoms” that leaves the list with an unnecessary extra conjunction (and). Choice D deletes the comma needed to separate the introductory clause from the rest of the sentence.

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While those archaic low entertainments are still easy to find on TV in the form of reality shows, soap operas, and asinine sitcoms and talk shows, the high quality of so many twenty-first century series has caused critics to begin viewing this era as a new golden age for television while film threatens to plunge into banality and irrelevancy.

A. NO CHANGE

B. garbage

C. relevancy

D. dull

A

The correct answer is A. The word banality means “dullness” or “ordinariness,” so it is used well to describe the kinds of films the author has been criticizing throughout the passage. Choice A is the best answer. Choice B would maintain the critical nature of the passage, but it would violate the more formal tone of a sentence that uses words such archaic, asinine, and irrelevancy. Choice C would create a weird contradiction by describing film as simultaneously relevant and irrelevant. Choice D has a similar meaning to banality, but it is a totally different part of speech: banality is a noun and dull is an adjective, so it could not be used in this context.

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Nevertheless, as television approaches and surpasses movies in terms of legitimacy, they also seems in danger of repeating some of the movie industry’s biggest mistakes.

A. NO CHANGE

B. Nevertheless, as television approaches and surpasses movies in terms of legitimacy, they also seem in danger of repeating some of the movie industry’s biggest mistakes.

C. Nevertheless, as television approaches and surpasses movies in terms of legitimacy, it also seem in danger of repeating some of the movie industry’s biggest mistakes.

D. Nevertheless, as television approaches and surpasses movies in terms of legitimacy, it also seems in danger of repeating some of the movie industry’s biggest mistakes.

A

The correct answer is D. As originally written, the sentence suffers from a lack of pronoun-antecedent agreement and a lack of pronoun-verb agreement, so choice A is incorrect. Only choice D corrects these two problems by changing the pronoun they to it, so that it agrees with the singular antecedent television and the singular verb seems. Choice B makes the pronoun and verb agree, but the pronoun is still plural when it must refer to the singular antecedent television. Choice C corrects the pronoun but fails to correct the verb, leaving a lack of agreement between the singular pronoun it and the plural verb seem.

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Part of cinema’s grace fall can be attributed to an over-reliance on lazy nostalgia.

A. NO CHANGE

B. Part of cinema’s fall into grace can be attributed to an over-reliance on lazy nostalgia

C. Part of cinema’s fall from grace can be attributed to an over-reliance on lazy nostalgia

D. Part of cinema’s graceful fall can be attributed to an over-reliance on lazy nostalgia

A

The correct answer is C. This question tests your familiarity with the idiom “fall from grace,” which means a loss of status or prestige. Only choice C uses that idiom correctly. The original sentence garbles it as “grace fall,” so choice A is incorrect. Choice B changes its meaning, suggesting a gaining of prestige and status rather than a loss of it. Choice D also changes its meaning, suggesting that film’s loss of status and prestige was somehow gracefully done.

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Studios feel comfortable pouring billions of dollars into movies about familiar superheroes, remake of proven hits, and even movies starring toys viewers may have played with in childhood because their nostalgia value seems to guarantee box office returns.

A. NO CHANGE

B. Studios feel comfortable pouring billions of dollars into movies about familiar superheroes, remakes of proven hits, and even movies starring toys viewers may have played with in childhood

C. Studios feel comfortable pouring billions of dollars into movies about familiar superheroes, remake of a proven hit, and even movies starring toys viewers may have played with in childhood

D. Studios feel comfortable pouring billions of dollars into movies about familiar superheroes, remake of proven hits, and even a movie starring toys viewers may have played with in childhood

A

The correct answer is B. As originally written, the sentence lacks parallel structure because all of the movie types are in the plural form except for “remake of proven hits,” so choice A is incorrect. Choice B corrects that error by writing it in the plural form: “remakes of proven hits.” Choice C simply makes the entire phrase singular (“remake of a proven hit”), which does not correct the error in parallelism. Choice D fails to correct the original error and introduces a new one that makes another item in the list singular (“a movie starring toys”).

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Which choice best maintains the sentence pattern already established in the paragraph?

Fox TV has revived its critical hit The X-Files. However, the revival that has had the greatest success is Netflix’s resurrection of Full House, one of the most critically loathed, juvenile, and straight-up awful series of the twentieth century.

A. NO CHANGE

B. The critical hit The X-Files has been revived by Fox TV.

C. Fox TV has revived The X-Files, a critical hit.

D. Fox TV has revived The X-Files.

A

The correct answer is A. The previous two sentences of the paragraph introduced a pattern of networks reviving or resurrecting a show from the past. In each case, a descriptive phrase is used before the title of the show is mentioned. The sentence currently in the paragraph maintains that style, so choice A is the best answer. Choice B breaks with that pattern and introduces the grammatical error by using the passive voice. Choice C is not grammatically incorrect, but it breaks with the paragraph’s established pattern by placing the descriptive phrase (“a critical hit”) after the show’s title for no logical reason. Choice D is grammatically incorrect and it senselessly deletes the descriptive phrase.

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Its success can only mean that more nostalgia-stoking revivals of equally bad but popular series could be on the way and on our new golden age of television could soon go bad.

A. NO CHANGE

B. tarnish

C. stink

D. improve

A

The correct answer is B. As originally written, the sentence ends the passage with a weak descriptive phrase: “go bad.” A better one could be used, so choice A is not the best answer. Choice B, tarnish, is a more precise and stronger word, and it also introduces an effective play-on-words since impure gold can tarnish. Choice B is the best answer. Choice C is stronger than “go bad,” put it is too crass to fit the more sophisticated tone the author has used throughout the rest of the passage. Choice D has the opposite meaning of the word needed here and changes the meaning of the sentence as a whole.

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Voter fraud has been a pervasive concern whenever election time rolls around in recent years.

A. NO CHANGE

B. Voter fraud has been a pervasive concern whenever election time rolled around in recent years

C. Voter fraud has been a pervasive concern whenever election time is rolling around in recent years

D. Voter fraud has been a pervasive concern whenever election time has rolled around in recent years

A

The correct answer is D. As originally written, the sentence suffers from a lack of verb agreement. The phrase has been is in the present perfect tense, but rolls is in the simple present tense. These verbs need to be in the same tense, so choice A is incorrect. Choice D corrects this problem by changing rolls to its present perfect form, has rolled. Choice B is incorrect because rolled is in the simple past tense. Choice C is incorrect because is rolling is in the present progressive tense.

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The greater use of electronic voting equipment that can allegedly be hacked has made some people really crazy, while the media and even politicians have fanned the flames, one even claiming that his losing of an upcoming election would be proof that the election had been “rigged.”

A. NO CHANGE

B. The greater use of electronic voting equipment that can allegedly be hacked has laid a withering blanket of anxiety upon the trembling masses

C. The greater use of electronic voting equipment that can allegedly be hacked has contributed to such concerns

D. The greater use of electronic voting equipment that can allegedly be hacked has made this bad

A

The correct answer is C. This passage is generally formal in tone, and the original sentence contains a phrase—”has made some people really crazy”—much too informal for it. Therefore, choice A is incorrect. Choice C corrects that issue with the more formal phrase “contributed to such concerns.” The phrase in choice B (“laid a withering blanket of anxiety upon the trembling masses”) is too florid for a passage that is formal yet simple and hardly concerned with being poetic. The phrase in choice D (“made this bad”) is too simplistic and vague for a passage that uses precise language.

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The voter fraud panic has inspired a crackdown on voters in some states, requiring citizens to produce special ID before casting their ballots.

A. NO CHANGE

B. worry

C. business

D. disaster

A

The correct answer is A. In the previous sentence, the author wrote of certain politicians “fanning the flames” of concerns regarding voter fraud, which suggests a situation intense enough to be described as “panic,” so the sentence is fine as originally written. Worry (choice B) is too weak to describe the situation. Business (choice C) is too weak and too vague, failing to indicate the seriousness of this issue. Choice D, however, is too intense. Disaster is not as appropriate a word for this context as panic is.

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“The Truth About Voter Fraud,” according to the Brenner Center’s report, most incidents of alleged voter fraud are actually the results of less calculated and nefarious causes, namely clerical errors.

A. NO CHANGE

B. According to “The Truth About Voter Fraud,” most incidents of alleged voter fraud are actually the results of less calculated and nefarious causes, namely clerical errors, the Brenner Center’s report.

C. According to “The Truth About Voter Fraud,” most incidents of alleged voter fraud, the Brenner Center’s report, are actually the results of less calculated and nefarious causes, namely clerical errors.

D. According to the Brenner Center’s report “The Truth About Voter Fraud,” most incidents of alleged voter fraud are actually the results of less calculated and nefarious causes, namely clerical errors.

A

The correct answer is D. The phrase “the Brenner Center’s report” needs to modify “The Truth About Voter Fraud,” and a modifying phrase belongs next to the thing that it is modifying in a clear way. As originally written, the sentence makes it seem as though “The Truth About Voter Fraud” is something in the Brenner Center’s report and not the report itself. Choice A can be eliminated because it is not a clear sentence. Choice B is even less clear, making it seem as though the Brenner Center’s report is a clerical error. Choice C makes it seem as though the Brenner Center’s report is voter fraud. Only choice D places the modifier so that it describes “The Truth About Voter Fraud” clearly.

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Furthermore, these errors account for as little as 0.00004% of votes, which are hardly enough to sway an election.

A. NO CHANGE

B. Furthermore, this error accounts for as little as 0.00004% of votes, which are hardly enough to sway an election

C. Furthermore, these errors account for as little as 0.00004% of vote, which are hardly enough to sway an election

D. Furthermore, these errors account for as little as 0.00004% of votes, which is hardly enough to sway an election

A

The correct answer is D. This sentence is describing how 0.00004% is too small a percentage to sway an election. “0.00004%” is a single percentage, so the verb that follows it must be in the singular form, but are is in the plural form. Therefore, choice A is incorrect and choice D is correct. Choice B fails to correct that agreement mistake and creates a new mistake by changing the word error to its singular form when the previous sentence referred to multiple “errors.” Choice C changes votes to its singular form vote, which is grammatically incorrect and fails to correct the original agreement mistake.

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Lorraine C. Minnite, Ph.D., of Columbia University, published a report with similar stuff.

A. NO CHANGE

B. findings

C. information

D. numbers

A

The correct answer is B. This passage is written in very precise language, and the word stuff is simply too vague for it, so choice A is not the best answer. Choice B more precisely indicates information discovered while conducting a report, so it is the best answer. Information (choice C) is less precise in indicating information specifically discovered while conducting a report, so while it is not incorrect in this context, it still is not as strong of an answer as choice B is. Choice D is incorrect because the findings in Minnite’s report that the passage mentions are not specific numerical data.

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Genuine numbers supporting real fraud were harder to come by similar studies by The Washington Post and Arizona State University support.

A. NO CHANGE

B. Genuine numbers supporting real fraud were harder to come by studies by The Washington Post and Arizona State University support.

C. Genuine numbers supporting real fraud were harder to come by. Similar studies by The Washington Post and Arizona State University support.

D. Genuine numbers supporting real fraud were harder to come by, as similar studies by The Washington Post and Arizona State University support.

A

The correct answer is D. As originally written, the sentence is a run-on because its opening clause (“Genuine numbers supporting real fraud were harder to come by”) and closing phrase (“similar studies by The Washington Post and Arizona State University support”) are not joined properly. Choice D corrects this error with a comma and the conjunction as. Choice B is still a run-on sentence, and it makes the additional error of senselessly deleting the adjective similar. Choice C creates a fragment of the closing phrase by dividing the original sentence into two sentences.

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(1) Although Texas instated a strict voter ID law, the Fifth Circuit Court decided that nothing more than racial bias inspired the law as conscious voter fraud could only be proven in two cases out of Texas’ past 20 million votes. (2) Two bad votes out of twenty million is hardly a serious enough situation to warrant the passing of excessive ID laws. (3) Justices have taken similar stances in voter fraud protection cases in North Carolina, Wisconsin, and at the Supreme Court level. (4) The data is convincing enough that United States courts have regularly stood against the conspiracy theorists.

To make this paragraph most logical, sentence 4 should be placed

A. NO CHANGE

B. before sentence 1.

C. after sentence 1.

D. after sentence 2.

A

The correct answer is B. The paragraph is mainly about courts standing against the people who promote the idea that voter fraud is a rampant problem. Sentence 4 would actually be an ideal introduction to this idea, so it would be best placed at the very beginning of the sentence. Therefore, choice B is the best answer. An introductory sentence should never be placed at the end of a paragraph, so choice A is incorrect. Choices C and D drop the sentence in the middle of the paragraph with no sense of logical flow.

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The fact is that significant instances of voter fraud have yet to be proven via close investigation in recent memory, yet the debate about whether or not elections can be “rigged” remains a major source of debate.

A. NO CHANGE

B. The fact is that significant instances of voter fraud have yet to be proven via carefully considered and close investigation in recent memory, yet the debate about whether or not elections can be “rigged” remains a major source of debate.

C. The fact is that significant instances of voter fraud have yet to be proven via close investigation in recent memory, yet the debate about whether or not elections can be “rigged” remains a significant and major source of debate.

D. The fact is that significant instances of voter fraud have yet to be proven, yet the debate about whether or not elections can be “rigged” remains a major source of debate.

A

The correct answer is A. As originally written, the sentence is packed with information but not so wordy that it is rendered unclear. It is a well-constructed sentence and does not need to be changed, so choice A is the best answer. However, since it is a rather long sentence, it certainly does not need to be made any longer, so adding the redundant words “carefully considered” to “close investigation” serves no purpose but to make the sentence unwieldy. Therefore, choice B is not the best answer. Choice C also makes the sentence a bit too wordy by introducing redundant information: significant and major mean the same thing, so including both words is unnecessary here. Choice D makes the opposite error of the other incorrect answer choices; it deletes some necessary information about investigations of voter fraud.

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Whether or not this has occurred in past elections is insignificant to elected officials, who theorize, it could happen in the future, [44] and such politicians may continue to call for closer watches on voting sites in elections to come.

A. NO CHANGE

B. Whether or not this has occurred in past elections is insignificant to elected officials, who theorize it could happen in the future

C. Whether or not this has occurred in past elections is insignificant to t elected officials who theorize it could happen in the future

D. Whether or not this has occurred in past elections is insignificant to elected officials who theorize, it could happen in the future

A

The correct answer is C. In this sentence, “who theorize” is a restrictive clause because removing it would change the sentence’s meaning. Restrictive clauses should not be offset with commas on either side of it, so choice A is incorrect and choice C is correct. Choices B and D both make the mistake of deleting only one comma, when both commas must be eliminated.

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A rigid red-and-white signerected on a rural road in Burma reads, “[The Military] AND THE PEOPLE IN ETERNAL UNITY. ANYONE ATTEMPTING TO DIVIDE THEM IS OUR ENEMY.”

A. NO CHANGE

B. born

C. floated

D. dripped

A

The correct answer is A. This choice makes the most sense given the context of the sentence. A standing structure added to an area, like a sign on a road, is typically erected. It is not born, so choice B is incorrect. It is also unlikely that the sign floated or dripped, so choices C and D are incorrect.

38
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It’s no wonder that Burma, also known as Myanmar, inspired two of the most well-known books about totalitarianism: Animal Farm and Nineteen Eighty-Four?

A. NO CHANGE

B. Animal Farm and Nineteen Eighty-Four.

C. Animal Farm and Nineteen Eighty-Four,

D. Animal Farm and Nineteen Eighty-Four!

A

The correct answer is B. Choice B is correct because the sentence is declarative and therefore requires a period. Choice A is incorrect because the sentence is not a question. Choice C is incorrect because it creates a run-on. Choice D is incorrect because the sentence is not an exclamation.

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Five years after Eric Arthur Blair began his tour of duty in the far-flung, obscure Asian colony, he returned to his homeland, shed his uniform, changed his name to George Orwell, and started a new career as a novelist.

A. NO CHANGE

B. darkened

C. obvious

D. uncertain

A

The correct answer is A. Choice A is correct because “obscure” supports the characterization of the colony as “far-flung” and out-of-the-way. Choice B is incorrect because there is no indication that the colony is not well-lit. Choice C is incorrect because the colony is the opposite of obvious. Choice D is incorrect because the word implies vagueness, which isn’t intended here.

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This land of haunting beauty, with its history of human rights violations, had also sparked filmmaker Ron Fricke’s imagination.

A. NO CHANGE

B. has also sparked

C. also sparked

D. will also spark

A

The correct answer is C. Choice C is correct because the sentence requires the simple past tense. Choice A is incorrect because this is past perfect tense. Choice B is incorrect because it is in the plural past tense, and it should be singular. Choice D is incorrect because it is in the future tense.

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Only music accompanies scenes of hundreds of Buddhist temples as they seemingly float upon seas of green foliage.

A. NO CHANGE

B. As they seemingly float above seas of green foliage, only music accompanies scenes of hundreds of Buddhist temples.

C. Only music accompanies scenes, as they seemingly float above seas of green foliage, of hundreds of Buddhist temples.

D. Only music accompanies scenes, of hundreds of Buddhist temples, as they seemingly float above a sea of green foliage.

A

The correct answer is A. Choice A is correct because the phrase “as they seemingly float above seas of green foliage” modifies, and thus must follow, “Buddhist temples.” Choices B and C are incorrect because they make it unclear what the modifying clause refers to. Choice C is incorrect because the use of commas is wrong.

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The military manages the country’s major industries and has also been accused of controlling Burma’s substantial heroin exports.

A. NO CHANGE

B. the countries major industries

C. the countrys major industries

D. the countries’ major industries

A

The correct answer is A. Choice A is correct because “country’s” is a singular possessive noun referring to Burma. Choice B is incorrect because it is plural, not possessive. Choice C is incorrect because it requires an apostrophe before the s. Choice D is incorrect because it is plural possessive.

43
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Which of the following most effectively presents the ideas in this sentence?

An honor given out, in 1991 given out to people, by the Nobel Committee since 1901, and organizations, she received the Nobel Peace Prize.

A. NO CHANGE

B. In 1991 she received the Nobel Peace Prize, an honor given out to people and organizations by the Nobel Committee since 1901.

C. The Nobel Peace Prize, since 1901 by the Nobel Committee, she received in 1991, an honor given out to people and organizations.

D. Given out to people, an honor in 1991, since 1901 and organizations, the Nobel Peace Prize she received, and organizations.

A

The correct answer is B. This version most effectively and clearly presents the ideas in this sentence. The disorganization of ideas and information in choices A, C, and D creates confusion.

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Not surprisingly, the album was banned and not allowed to be distributed in Burma. Anyone caught attempting to smuggle it into the country would have been imprisoned for three to twenty years for smuggling.

A. NO CHANGE

B. Not surprisingly, the album was banned. Anyone caught attempting to smuggle it into the country would have been imprisoned for three to twenty years.

C. Not surprisingly, the album was banned and not allowed to be distributed in Burma. Anyone caught attempting to smuggle it into the country would have been imprisoned for three to twenty years.

D. Not surprisingly, the album was banned from things that could be smuggled into Burma. Anyone caught attempting to obtain it in the country would have been imprisoned for three to twenty years.

A

The correct answer is B. Only choice B eliminates redundancies while still communicating that the album was banned and that smugglers were punished. Choice A is incorrect because “not allowed to be distributed in Burma” and “for smuggling” are redundant. Choice C is incorrect because “not allowed to be distributed in Burma” is redundant. Choice D is incorrect; as written, it implies that some things can be legally smuggled into Burma. It also inaccurately suggests that merely trying to obtain the album in Burma, not smuggle it in, carried a possible sentence of imprisonment for three to twenty years.

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Soon after, the European Union lifted sanctions against Burma and offering them financial aid.

A. NO CHANGE

B. offering her

C. offer them

D. offered it

A

The correct answer is D. This sentence opens with the phrase “soon after,” which implies that the events have already happened. Another indication is the use of the past tense “lifted” in the sentence. Therefore, to maintain correct parallel structure—along with the correct pronoun “it” when referring to Burma—the correct version of the underlined phrase is “offered it,” choice D. Choice A incorrectly uses the present verb tense and plural pronoun “them.” Choice B incorrectly uses the present verb tense and feminine pronoun “her.” Choice C also uses the incorrect verb tense and plural pronoun.

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There are signs that the country is emerging from their isolation.

A. NO CHANGE

B. its isolation

C. our isolation

D. your isolation

A

The correct answer is B. Choice B is correct because the pronoun “its” refers to “the country,” which is a singular noun. Choices A, C, and D are wrong because they do not correctly refer to the antecedent, “the country.”

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Which choice provides the most relevant detail?

Perhaps no one has written more widely on the subject in the United States than John Dewey, a philosopher and teacher, whose theories on education have a large social component, that is, an emphasis on education as a social act, and the classroom or learning environment as a replica of society.

A. NO CHANGE

B. sometimes called “the father of public education,”

C. the son of a grocer in Burlington, Vermont,

D. a university professor who taught ethics and logic,

A

The correct answer is B. Noting that Dewey is known as “the father of public education” sets up the rest of the passage and provides information that supports the main idea of the passage. Although accurate, choices A, C, and D do not support the main idea of the paragraph and introduce ideas that are not developed in the passage.

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Perhaps no one has written more widely on the subject in the United States than John Dewey, a philosopher and teacher, whose theories on education have a large social component, that is, an emphasis on education as a social act, and the classroom or learning environment as a replica of society.

A. NO CHANGE

B. as a social act, and the classroom, or learning environment, as a replica of society

C. as a social act and the classroom or learning environment as a replica of society

D. as a social act and the classroom, or learning environment, as a replica of society

A

The correct answer is C. Choice C is correct because this part of an extended prepositional phrase introduced by the phrase “emphasis on.” Because of this, no commas are necessary as they would separate the preposition from its other subjects (“the classroom” or “learning environment”). Choice A is incorrect because the comma causes confusion about the subject of the preposition “on.” Choice B is incorrect for the same reason and also because “or learning environment” is a restrictive phrase and does not require commas. Choice D is incorrect because “or learning environment” is a restrictive phrase and does not require commas.

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First, they were a necessity of life inasmuch as living beings needed to maintain themselves through a process of renewal.

A. NO CHANGE

B. it was

C. we were

D. he was

A

The correct answer is B. Choice B is correct because the antecedent is “education,” which means the pronoun should be “it.” Choice A is incorrect because it implies that the antecedent is “aspects or characteristics.” Choice C is incorrect because the passage is not written in the first person and there is no antecedent it could logically refer to. Choice D is incorrect because it implies that the antecedent is Dewey, which is incorrect.

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Therefore, just as humans needed sleep; food; water; and shelter for physiological renewal, they also needed education to renew their minds, assuring that their socialization kept pace with physiological growth.

A. NO CHANGE

B. sleep: food: water: and shelter

C. sleep, food, water; and shelter

D. sleep, food, water, and shelter

A

The correct answer is D. Choice D is correct because semicolons are only necessary when the list items themselves contain commas. Since they don’t, this series only requires commas. Choices A and C are incorrect because they misuse semicolons. Choice B is incorrect because it misuses colons.

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The main aspect of education was its social component, which was to be accomplished by providing the young with an environment that would provide a nurturing atmosphere to encourage the growth of their as yet undeveloped social customs.

The writer is considering revising the underlined portion of the sentence to read:

A second aspect of education was its social component,

Should the writer make this revision here?

A. Yes, because the change improves the organization.

B. Yes, because the change clarifies the aspects of education.

C. No, because the change eliminates information that supports the main idea of the paragraph.

D. No, because the change makes the organization of this part of the passage unclear.

A

The correct answer is A. Changing “another” to “a second” improves the organization because it includes an ordinal number as the previous and following paragraphs do. Choice B is incorrect because it does not clarify the aspects of education. Choice C is incorrect because the change does not eliminate supporting information. Choice D is incorrect because the change does not negatively affect the organization.

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A third aspect of public education was the provision of direction to youngsters, who might otherwise be left in uncontrolled situations without the steadying and organizing influences of school.

A. NO CHANGE

B. get wild and crazy if not for a teacher keeping them in check.

C. change direction, much like the wind, with no one to guide them.

D. be lost, forlorn without school to steer them toward moral clarity.

A

The correct answer is A. Choice A is correct because it matches and maintains the formal and objective tone of the passage. Choice B is incorrect because the tone and diction are informal. Choice C is incorrect because, while the diction is formal, the tone is overly dramatic. Choice D is incorrect because the tone is subjective.

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Direction was not to be of an autonomous nature, but rather indirect through the selection of the school situations in which the youngster participated.

A. NO CHANGE

B. uncertain

C. overt

D. abstract

A

The correct answer is C. Choice C is correct because the context clue “but rather” suggests a word that is the opposite of “indirect,” and “overt” comes closest to this meaning. Choices A, B, and D are incorrect because they do not make sense in the context of the sentence.

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On the other hand, Dewey saw public education as a catalyst for growth. Since the young came to school capable of growth, it was the role of education to provide opportunities for that growth to occur.

A. NO CHANGE

B. Finally,

C. In retrospect,

D. Therefore,

A

The correct answer is B. Choice B is correct because it effectively sets up the fourth and final item in a list of examples. Choice A is incorrect because it implies a contrast which is unsupported by the context. Choice C is incorrect because it suggests the author is looking back, which is unsupported by the context. Choice D is incorrect because it suggests a conclusion, which the paragraph is not.

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Instead, education was a continuous reconstructions of experiences, grounded very much in the present environment.

A. NO CHANGE

B. educations were continuous reconstructions of experiences

C. education was a continuous reconstruction of experience

D. education was experiences being continuously reconstructed

A

The correct answer isC. Choice C is correct because the noun “education” must agree in number with “reconstruction.” Choices A, B, and D are incorrect because “education” must be singular in order to be in agreement with “reconstruction.”

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The nature of the larger society that supports the educational system, since Dewey’s model places a heavy emphasis on the social component, is of paramount importance.

A. NO CHANGE

B. The nature of the larger society that supports the educational system is of paramount important since Dewey’s model places a heavy emphasis on the social component.

C. Of paramount importance, since Dewey’s model places a heavy emphasis on the social component, is the nature of the larger society that supports the educational system.

D. Since Dewey’s model places a heavy emphasis on the social component, the nature of the larger society that supports the educational system is of paramount importance.

A

The correct answer is D. In choice D, the subordinate clause that begins with “since” should precede the second part of the sentence that it qualifies. Choice A is incorrect because the subordinate clause is illogical in the middle of the sentence. Choice B is incorrect because the subordinate clause helps set up the rest of the sentence and belongs at the beginning. Choice C is incorrect because the arrangement of the clauses is awkward and difficult to follow.

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According to Dewey, education in such a society should provide members of the group a stake or interest in social relationships and the ability to subjugate change without compromising the order and stability of the society.

A. NO CHANGE

B. negotiate

C. complicate

D. obfuscate

A

The correct answer is B. Choice B supports the implication that members of the group could find a way to enact and undergo change without causing social instability. Choice A is incorrect because it suggests that change is a negative thing that must be overcome. Choices C and D are incorrect because they both imply meanings that are not supported by the context of the sentence.

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The idea of counting living individuals becomes difficult given perennials that reproduce vegetatively by sending out runners or rhizomes, splitting at the stem base, or by producing arching canes that take root where they touch the ground.

A. NO CHANGE

B. by sending out runners or rhizomes, a split at the stem base, or the production of arching canes that take root where they touch the ground.

C. by sending out runners or rhizomes, splitting at the stem base, or in the production of arching canes that take root where they touch the ground.

D. by sending out runners or rhizomes, splitting at the stem base, or producing arching canes that take root where they touch the ground.

A

The correct answer is D. Choice D accurately employs parallel structure. Choice A is incorrect because the word “by” before “producing arching canes” is unnecessary and prevents the clause from being parallel. Choice B is incorrect because each part of the clause is constructed in a different way (“by sending,” “ a split, “ “ the production”). Choice C is incorrect because the last part of the clause (“in the production . . . “) is not constructed like the rest of the clause.

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Their average life span is 1–8 months, depending on the species and on the environment where they are located (the same desert plant may complete its life cycle in 8 months one year and in 1 month the next, depending on the amount of rain it receives).

A. NO CHANGE

B. it’s

C. its’

D. it is

A

The correct answer is A. Choice A is correct because “its” is a possessive determiner that refers to “desert plant.” Choice B is incorrect because it is a contraction of “it is.” Choice C is incorrect because it is not a word. Choice D is incorrect because it does not make sense in the sentence.

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Because herbaceous perennials have no growth rings, it is difficult to age them. Methods that have been used to age them include counting leaf scars and reducing the rate of spread in tussock (clumped) forms.

A. NO CHANGE

B. hedging

C. estimating

D. valuing

A

The correct answer is C. Choice C is correct because the context of the sentence suggests a word that refers to an attempt to determine a number. Choices A and B are incorrect because “reducing” and “hedging” suggest actions that are not supported by the context of the sentence. Choice D is incorrect because it suggests a valuation of quality and worth rather than an attempt at counting.

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Suffrutescent shrubs (hemixyles) falls somewhere between herbaceous perennials and true shrubs. They develop perennial, woody tissue only near the base of their stems.

A. NO CHANGE

B. Suffrutescent shrubs (hemixyles) fall

C. Suffrutescent shrub (hemixyles) fall

D. Suffrutescent shrubs (hemixyles) has fallen

A

The correct answer is B. Choice B is correct because the subject “suffrutescent shrubs (hemixyles)” is plural and must be followed by the plural verb, “fall.” Choice A is incorrect because the subject is plural and the verb is singular. Choice C is incorrect because the subject is singular and the verb is plural. Choice D is incorrect because the subject is plural and the verb is singular and not in the present tense.

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Which choice most effectively combines the two sentences at the underlined portion?

Suffrutescent shrubs (hemixyles) falls somewhere between herbaceous perennials and true shrubs. They develop perennial, woody tissue only near the base of their stems. The rest of the shoot system is herbaceous and dies back each year.

A. stems, the rest of the shoot system

B. stems because the rest of the shoot system

C. stems: the rest of the shoot system

D. stems; the rest of the shoot system

A

The correct answer is D. Choice D is correct because both sentences are closely related, independent clauses. Choice A is incorrect because a comma is not sufficient to join two independent clauses. Choice B is incorrect because there is no cause/effect relationship present, which the word “because” implies. Choice C is incorrect because a colon is only used to separate independent clauses when the second clause explains or amplifies the first, which is not the case here.

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Woody perennials (trees and shrubs) have the longest life spans.

A. NO CHANGE

B. Woody perennials—trees and shrubs—have the longest life spans.

C. Woody perennials, trees and shrubs, have the longest life spans.

D. Woody perennials “trees and shrubs” have the longest life spans.

A

The correct answer is A. The parentheses in choice A correctly indicate that the phrase “trees and shrubs” is supplemental information and not necessary for understanding the rest of the sentence. Choice B is incorrect because dashes are used to call attention to the text that they surround, which is not intended here. Choice C is incorrect because it makes it unclear whether woody perennials are trees and shrubs, or if the author is talking about them in addition to trees and shrubs. Choice D is not correct because quotation marks are not used to set off extraneous information, but rather to highlight specific words or to cast doubt on a word or phrase.

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Irregardless of the life span, annual or perennial, one can identify about eight important age states in an individual plant or population.

A. NO CHANGE

B. Regardless

C. Inregardless

D. Regarding less

A

The correct answer is B. Choice B is correct because “regardless” is the correct form of this conventional expression. Choices A, C, and D are incorrect variations of this phrase.

65
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If a population shows all eight states, it is stable and is most likely a part of a climax community.

A. NO CHANGE

B. diminishing

C. ephemeral

D. uniform

A

The correct answer is A. Choice A is correct because the context suggests that if the eight age states exist, the population is healthy, viable, and not going anywhere. Choice B is incorrect because it suggests the population is shrinking, which is not implied by the context. Choice C is incorrect because it suggests impermanence, which is not implied by the text. Choice D is incorrect because it suggests that the population is homogenous, which is not implied by the context.

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Commercial pilots, for example, had a median annual wage of $75,620: more than double the median for all occupations in May 2014.

A. NO CHANGE

B. of $75,620 more than double

C. of $75,620; more than double

D. of $75,620—more than double

A

The correct answer is D. Choice D is correct because the dash helps draw attention to the supplemental information that follows it. Choice A is incorrect because a colon is not used to introduce a dependent clause that expands on an independent clause. Choice B is incorrect because there should be punctuation to separate the number from the rest of the sentence. Choice C is incorrect because a semicolon is used to join two independent clauses.

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But that median figure diminishes the fact that the gap between the 90th percentile wage and the 10th percentile wage was more than $100,000.

A. NO CHANGE

B. contradicts

C. conceals

D. equivocates

A

The correct answer is C. Choice C is correct because the context implies that the author wants to suggest that the median figure hides the fact that the gap was more than $100,000. Choice A is incorrect because it does not make sense in the sentence—the median figure doesn’t reduce the fact. Choice B is incorrect because the author is not presenting a disagreement. Choice D is incorrect because the context does not suggest vagueness and it is grammatically incorrect.

68
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Everyone is unique.

A. NO CHANGE

B. common

C. normal

D. typical

A

The correct answer is A. The point being made in this paragraph is that everyone is different and comes with an individualized set of skills for different jobs. Therefore, describing them as unique is most appropriate. The adjectives in the other answer choices don’t support this notion and are incorrect.

69
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Each person comes to a position with her own set of skills, a capacity for adapting to the demands of the job, and their own personal strengths and weaknesses.

A. NO CHANGE

B. our

C. its

D. her

A

The correct answer is D. Choice D is correct because the antecedent in this sentence is “each person,” and the pronoun “she” was used previously to refer to the antecedent. Choices A, B, and C are incorrect because they do not align with “her” in number and gender.

70
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In addition, job titles can be deceiving.

A. NO CHANGE

B. tenuous

C. impractical

D. incidental

A

The correct answer is A. Choice A is correct because the author’s point is that “no two jobs are identical” and that because of this, job titles can be misleading. Choice B is incorrect as it suggests a weak or unconvincing connection, which doesn’t make sense in the context of the sentence. Choice C is incorrect because the sentence is not talking about the practicality of job titles. Choice D is incorrect because the sentence is not suggesting job titles are unplanned or unimportant.

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In occupations with less variability among workers, wage differences are usually vast.

A. NO CHANGE

B. noticeable

C. small

D. productive

A

The correct answer is C. This sentence is highlighting the reduced variability in certain occupations, which would indicate that wage differences, if any, would be small. Referring to these wage differences as vast, noticeable, or productive wouldn’t support the notion of reduced variability, so answer choices A, B, and D are incorrect.

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Nevertheless, there are a variety of factors that effect how much you earn.

A. NO CHANGE

B. affect

C. infect

D. reflect

A

The correct answer is B. Choice B is correct because the author is listing the factors that influence, lead to, or affect, how much a person earns. Choice A is incorrect because the verb “effect” is used to suggest someone has succeeded in making something happen, which is not intended here. Choices C and D are incorrect because they do not make sense in the context of the sentence.

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Some of the factors—cost of living and the local demand for the skill these are—behind this, variation.

A. NO CHANGE

B. Cost of living and the local demand for the skill: some of the factors behind this variation.

C. Some of the factors behind this variation, cost of living and the local demand for the skill.

D. Some of the factors behind this variation include cost of living and the local demand for the skill.

A

The correct answer is D. Choice D corrects the fact that this sentence lacks a verb and is incomplete by adding “include.” Choices A, B, and C are incorrect because they are not complete sentences.

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Consisted of thirty-five Navajo code talkers.

A. NO CHANGE

B. Having consisted of

C. A group which were made of

D. It consisted of

A

The correct answer is D. This sentence is a fragment requiring a subject, which the pronoun “it” provides. Choices B and C do not work because the specific subject doesn’t have a verb—”having” and “were” are part of the descriptive phrase, not the direct action of the subject.

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During World War II, the United States Marines needed to develop a code, for communicating top-secret information.

A. NO CHANGE

B. code for communicating

C. code, for communicating,

D. code for communicating,

A

The correct answer is B. The phrase “for communicating” is set off by a comma in the passage, but because the description “for communicating” modifies “code” by defining the purpose of that code, “for communicating” is a restrictive phrase and should not be separated from the word or phrase it modifies. This makes choices A and C incorrect because the comma after “code” separates the restrictive phrase and the word it modifies. Choice D is incorrect because the comma after “communicating” is incorrect.