Remains Flashcards
“On another occasion”
- Begins mid action
- Anecdotal Language (matter of fact)
“Legs it” “Tosses his guts”
Colloquialism
“Myself and somebody else and somebody else”
- Deflects blame
- Minimises role
“Probably armed, possibly not”
- Guilt
- PTSD (effect of his actions)
- Repetition shows the conflicting ideas of the soldier
“I see every round as it rips through his life”
- Violent metaphor (highlights soldiers guilt and shock)
- Different aspect of conflict (conflicting thoughts… mentally)
“Then I’m home on leave.”
- Caesura
- Hoping for an end
“and I swear/I see every round as it rips through his life”
- Enjambment
- Break highlights the moment the speaker becomes a broken man
“Blood-shadow”
- Memory of the man
- Blood = death
- Shadow = memories lingering
“One of my mates goes by/and tosses his guts back into his body”
- Juxtaposition
- Severity of event is compared with relaxed and careless mannerisms
- Colloquialism
- Imagery… binmen
“Some distant, sun-stunned, sand-smothered land”
- Sibilance
- Oxymoron
“His bloody life in my bloody hand”
- MY… shift in responsibility (‘somebody else and somebody else’) responsibility taken
- Macbeth reference
- Raw & harsh image conveying the speakers unstable mental state of guilt after war (PTSD)
Speaker?
Guardsman Tromans (Basra, Iraq)
Collection?
The Not Dead
- “These are poems of survivors”
- “Men who return from war in body but never wholly, in mind”
Main Themes?
- Guilt
- After-effects of war
- PTSD
- Mental and physical conflict
Anti War or Pro War?
Anti War