Remains Flashcards
Simon Armitage
Context
1) Poet
2) summary of poem
+ Simon Armitage
+ about the guilt a british soldier goes through after shooting a man during the time of the Iraqi war
‘on another ———’
On another occassion
makes this story seem like one of many, explicitly seems like a funny anecdote but implicitly; shows that soldiers guilt is widespread
media res
line length / rhyme scheme
irregular- like a story
narrator and change
‘we’ to ‘I’ —> sounds like a personal confession, revealing his guilt, which will stay with him forever
volta
at start sounds like a funny anecdote, morphing into a gruesome death
volta on line 17
to guilt of soldier
‘L— it’
legs it
colloquial language- trivialises the mans death, showing how the soldier did not make understand the severity of his actions
repetition of ‘a– t—-‘
all three
hints at guilt- wants to shift blame
‘r— through his —-‘
‘b—- d——- on the other side’
**‘rips through his life’
‘broad daylight on the other side’
violent metaphor- shocking alternatively violent imagery exaggerating the horror of his crime
‘t—– his g— back into his body’
tosses his guts back into his body
casually dispense of body. on the other hand- treats dead body with disdain and devoid of emotion -
tosses his guts = sibilance - shows the shame and digust in his voices- regrets actions
‘end of —–, except not ——’
End of story, except not really
volta and change in mood of the poem
‘his b—- - s——– stays on the s—–’
his blood-shadow stays on the street
visual reminder of death, showing the guilt of his actions will haunt him forever. memories will plauge him
repition of ‘possibly armed, possibly not’
replays the event in his mind- inner turmoil
guilt
‘d– in behind e—– l—-‘
dug in behind enemy lines
metaphor to compare the memory to a soldier in a trench- haunting but also an inescapable experience as trenches were renouned to be mundane places where you are trapped.
‘his ——- l— in my ——- h—-‘
his bloody life in my bloody hands
bloody = gruseomeness of death but also swearing in anger
no collective responsibility —> he feels completely responsible
allusion to Macbeth- shows how he is overiddn=en and consumed by guilt- just like LMB
how is guilt portrayed
- consuming
- allusion to emphasise guilt- LMB- how guilt causes mental torture
- REPITION highlights the immense pain guilt has caused him