Remains Flashcards
Remains - Form
No regular line length or rhyme scheme - like a story
‘We’ to ‘I’ - collective experience to personal emotions
Remains - Structure
Turns quickly from light anecdote to a brutal death
Turning point at 5th stanza. Tone, thoughts and emotions are changed by experience.
Remains - Quote to show death
“I see broad daylight on the other side”
Through his body, gory
Into the afterlife? - death is good in comparison to today (mental anguish)
Remains - Quote to show memory
“His blood-shadow stays on the street”
Physical embodiment of the soldier’s memories
Sibilance and allitteration of ‘shadow stays’ suggests a biblical reference to snake of Garden of Eden which implies his evil acts will never be forgotten like God didn’t forget Adam and Eve for obeying the snake
Remains - Quote to show guilt
“he’s carted off in the back of a lorry”
Change of tone which implies the anecdote is over
“Carted” - colloquial language which is usually used around war. Suggests he misses front line as he is using words usually used around the lads from the army
Remains - Context
Story of a British soldier in Iraq, taken from interviews