Productive Emails Flashcards
Save your time by writing effective emails
Subject line for dinner invitation
Bad: Dinner
Good: Dinner party at Starbucks
Best: Dinner party at Starbucks this Sat (Nov/2) @ 8pm
Subject for report submission
Bad: Report
Good: Revenue Report for Q2
Best: Project X Revenue Q2 Report w/ notes and comments
Subject for sharing survey results
Bad: Tracking
Good: Tracking specs for blog
Best: Google Analytics tracking specs for abc.com
Subject for workshop announcement
Bad: Workshop
Good: Email productivity workshop
Best: Live email productivity workshop Nov/7 @ 3pm PDT
Subject for contact requirement
Bad: Alice
Good: Call Alice Samson
Best: Call Alice Samson at 111–123–1234 ASAP
Subject line for calling to import action
Bad: Contact list
Good: Import contact list
Best: Import contact list (attached) into CRM before this weekend
Subject for something urgent
URGENT – Building maintenance tomorrow.
Subject for sending general information
FYI – Donuts in the kitchen courtesy of Bob.
Subject for emails with empty body
Today’s meeting is at 6pm. EndOfMessage.
Subject for emails that no response is needed
Comming 15m late. Start without me. NoReplyNeeded.
Formal greetings
- Dear Sir/ Madam,
- Dear Sir or Madam,
- To whom it may concern:
- Dear Mr/ Mz Jones,
- Dear Dr Smith,
Informal greetings
- Hi Alice,
- Hello Bob,
- Dear Mum,
Formal reasons for writing/replying
- I am writing to make a reservation/ to apply for the position of…/ to confirm my booking/ to ask for further information about …
- I am writing with regard to the sale of …/ to the complaint you made on 29 February
- Thank you for your e-mail of 29 February regarding the sale of… / concerning the conference in Zurich.
- With reference to our telephone conversation on Friday, I would like to let you know that…
Informal reasons for writing/replying
- Just a quick note to invite you to…/ to tell you that…
- This is to invite you to join us for a picnic on 20 May.
- Thanks for your e-mail, it was wonderful/great to hear from you.
First contact to unknown person
- I found your name in the references of X’s paper on …
- I am writing to you because …
- Your address was given to me by …
- Your name was given to me by …
Chasing your previous mail
- Did you get my last message sent on … ?
- I was wondering whether you had received my email (see below).
- May we remind you that we are still awaiting your reply to our message dated … ∗
- We would be grateful if you could reply as soon as possible.
- Sorry, but given that I have not heard from you I am worried that I did not explain the situation clearly.
Formal making a request or asking for information
- Could you please let me know if you can attend the fair/ if you are available for a meeting on 12 December?
- I would appreciate it if you could send me a brochure/ if you could reply within two days.
- Could you possibly arrange a meeting with my secretary?
- I would also like to know if there are any swimming pools in your area.
- Please, let me know how much the tickets cost.
Informal making a request or asking for information
- I was wondering if you could come and see me sometime next week.
- Would you mind coming early to help me clear up the place?
- Do you think you could call Jerry for me?
- Can you call me/ get back to me asap? (as soon as possible)
Showing awareness that you are taking up recipient’s time
- I realize you must be very busy at the moment but if you could spare a moment I would be most grateful.
- If it wouldn’t take up too much of your time then I would be very grateful if you could …
- Clearly, I don’t want to take up too much of your time but if you could …
- Obviously, I don’t expect you to …. but any help you could give me would be much appreciated.
Asking to receive papers
- I would like to receive a copy of your PhD Thesis “Deep learning and its applications”.
- Last week I attended the workshop on X. I was interested in your presentation on “Y.” Have you by any chance written a paper on that topic? If so, I would very much appreciate it if you could email me a copy.
Trying to understand the problem
- I am not completely clear what the problem is.
- I’m sorry but I don’t seem to be able to understand the problem. If possible could you give me more details to clarify the situation.
- I’m not really clear about this—please clarify.
- So if I have understood correctly, the problem is …
- So you are saying that …
Formal offering help or giving information
- We are happy to let you know that your article has been selected for publication.
- I am glad to inform you that we will be holding our annual conference in Zurich on 20 September 2014.
- We regret to inform you that the show has been cancelled due to bad weather conditions.
- We are willing to arrange another meeting with the CEO.
- We would be glad to send you another statement if necessary.
- Please, let me know if I can be of further assistance.
- Should you need any further information/assistance, do not hesitate to contact us.
Informal offering help or giving information
- I’m sorry, but I can’t make it tomorrow. (= I can’t come tomorrow.)
- I’m happy to tell you that John and I are getting married next month.
- Would you like me to come early and help you clear up the place?
- How about I come and help you out?
- Do you need a hand with moving the furniture?
Withdrawing acceptance
- I am sorry to have to inform you that I am no longer able to …
- Due to family problems I am sorry to have to inform you that …
- I am sorry to give you such short notice and I sincerely hope that this won’t cause you too much trouble.
Formal complaining
- I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with… / to complain about…
- I regret to say that I was not completely satisfied with the room you provided us.
- We regret to inform you that your payment is considerably overdue.
- I would like to receive a full refund and compensation for the damages.
- I am interested to hear how your company can compensate us for the distress we suffered.
Informal complaining
- I’m sorry to say that you’re late with the payments.
- I hope you won’t mind me saying that the place you’d recommended to us wasn’t as nice as we’d expected.